Rebirth of High Marriage

The novels written by Lin Xi are all very, very good. I have read all three of them, but now I am mainly talking about this one. Both the male and female protagonists are very smart, there is no misunderstanding, and any unclear things will be explained clearly. For example, the things that Qin Shuyuan did, the male and female protagonists will not take it to heart and not say it out loud, and I will not say anything. Anyway, it is very interesting. Come on!

Every book is beautiful😊,

The plot is light and watery, and the writing is stiff. After more than 20 chapters, I didn't want to read it anymore. It's boring and watery.

It's really good-looking, positive, and full of power when you read it.

It is said that the male protagonist likes the original owner, and he can also see that the original owner's friend likes him, but he sent a farewell letter to the original owner's friend. He did not receive a reply from the original owner, but received a reply from the original owner's friend, saying in the letter that the original owner asked him to give up and stop harassing him. Then the male protagonist complained about the original host and thought she was cruel. Contradiction? The author wanted to make the male protagonist smart, but the whole thing showed his stupidity! He is still incapable of being furious, even if the courtship fails and the other party does not accept it, why should the male protagonist blame the person being courted? The male protagonist is so stupid that he knows that his original friend likes him, so he still asks her to deliver the letter? He also believed that the other party said that the original owner rejected his courtship... Haha🙃 Now that the heroine is here, is he stupid enough to wake up? The problem is that when he wakes up, the person he likes is still the original owner. In order to get back together, the author wrote that the male protagonist died of the original protagonist after being rejected. Therefore, even if the male protagonist likes her again, the one he likes is the female protagonist who lives under this body. The heroine's problem is that she is a friend of the original character, and at first it was suspected that she was whitewashed by the author. Later, the author did not clean up, and let her go dark to the end. The author changed from trusting the heroine to one where the heroine could tell at a glance that her friend liked the hero... The turn was very stiff... It was really not as smart as the heroine who saw through it when she met her friend for the first time, after all, the hero was also present at the time!

The main plot content is very interesting, but the side stories are too cumbersome and long-winded, so I skipped reading. Although it is long-winded, the ending is hasty! Many stories seem not to be told well. The heroine is not a virgin, decisive. Especially since she has never been in contact with her unreliable biological mother, it's a bit unpleasant that Bai Shuyue can still rely on the heroine's shadow, but it's understandable. I like to watch the male and female protagonists deal with the Bai family and the villains. Three children is too little! There should be another child for the biological father, with his biological father's last name. Give another surname to Grandpa Wang and Grandpa Wang. If you give birth abroad, Family Planning has no control over it.

The author's choice of subject matter is very good, and he describes the motherland's growth in detail. China is very powerful now and will surpass other countries in the future. Because every one of us Chinese works very hard.

The overall structure of this book is good, there is no anticlimax, and the patriotism is worthy of praise. However, the author's writing skills are weak and there is still a lot of room for improvement: 1. The character description is not deep and there is a tendency of homogeneity. For example, after Tang Nian went abroad, his language and behavior were basically the same as Bai Shulan's, and it was impossible to tell that they were two people; Wu Xiuli's family sold her again and again, and so did Wang Wenli's family, as if all bad native families were the same; 2. The character spectrum could be simplified, such as Jack and Bai Shulan. Lan's cousin appeared very early. He was the lead for the heroine to recognize her biological father, and was also the heroine's career related person. He appeared when the heroine recognized her relatives and the film was finalized. Grandpa Bai, grandma Bai and other Bai family members were quietly finalized. Even Bai's father and Mikal disappeared quietly... Supporting roles like this should be reorganized; 3. There are many plot threads, the narrative is not rigorous, and the climax is not obvious.

I like

There are too many typos, and many parts are based on guesswork.