Alchemist of All Elements

I have only read the first few dozen chapters. As a bookworm of 15 years, there are not many books that can keep me reading for such a long time. Although I haven't read the rest yet, it's not important. The story frame is good, but the writing style is a bit immature, 70 points.

The writing was very good in the early stage, but it got a bit rushed later on, and the scope was a bit broad, and there were a lot of pitfalls that I didn't have time to fill in. After all, this is the first book, and it's already excellent even if it doesn't end badly.

There was too much nonsense, and I skipped through it. For example, when I asked an arithmetic question to test the great elders, I said I was going to ask the question, and then I talked about hundreds of words of irrelevant stuff, and then I asked the question, and I talked about hundreds of words more, and then I said "no". The plot is boring

Has internal odor

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There is too much nonsense. I keep trying to make up the word count. It's too bad.

There is really too much nonsense. Everything that does not need to be explained is explained clearly, not just once or twice. It is too cumbersome and makes me tired to read.

The chapters are incoherent, the merits of the alchemist cannot be described and the importance of wealth is not magnified. There is almost no character description. The character names are too vague and the sense of hierarchy is too poor. In the end, it seems that he is written as a prostitute.

The writing style is a bit immature, and the author doesn't know how to divide it into paragraphs. Everything else is fine, at least I can read it.

The scene is very real