After Raising a Child and Cultivating Immortality, the Wicked Stepmother Turns Over a New Leaf!

Finished reading, no cp. It was pretty good in the early stages, but then it ended like a joke 😂

The first few chapters were pretty good, but the following chapters became more and more outrageous. Sometimes I picked up a man, and now I picked up a woman. The main story line was unclear and it was a mess.

Want to see a side story, where is the heroine's partner?

I got a little bored after reading a few chapters, so I skipped through a few chapters and then went straight to the ending. Not very pretty. Personal opinion.

The story is fresh! Interesting characters! The plot is vivid! Worth a look! Like!

This is the first time I watched Taneda Bunga Shujin. The plot is okay, but the writing is average. The overall narrative feels like a hammer here and there. The rhythm is not very good. Many things are not explained well. The second half of Xiuzhen is even more hasty. However, the characterization is quite good. The heroine was really a cold-blooded monk at the beginning, who often "didn't pay attention" and "didn't care". Later, after getting along with children, she slowly learned to care about each other and enjoy family affection, and she would not be merciful to bad people. The five children are also well written. I like Gu Zhen the most. He is so quiet and transparent, but he sees things most clearly.

I don't like it in the early stage, but in the later stage, whatever you want! Anyway, so-so

There are always mistakes in the sentences, there are typos in the front, and when the sentences don't make sense, I can barely read them. But suddenly when I saw a competition between sects and others, I suddenly said, the heroine thinks about herself. Have you confused me? I don't even know why I miss myself. But there are few mistakes. The plot content is still very exciting. I hope the author will read it carefully when writing the novel.

The beginning is good, but the ending is very rushed. Five children are quite a burden, and the heroine likes to take them with her wherever she goes. I can't understand how a child who is not my biological child can treat my own child with such care. Maybe I have a narrow mind and can only treat my own child with all my heart.

Not bad