My Super Zombie Girlfriend

It's too childish, it doesn't feel apocalyptic at all, it's more like campus love. The protagonist is also somewhat mentally retarded.

The apocalyptic flow has turned into a campus love flow. In the beginning, the protagonist is reborn and beats the enemy bravely. After that, he becomes crazy and crazy. He holds the enemy summoner and doesn't know what others want to do to you. He just slaps the villain like a righteous guy. Then the enemy works hard to develop and then acts as a monster without caring about the consequences. Not long after the rebirth, the apocalypse suddenly appears, but there is no progress. It is too bad to watch later.

The ending is a bit hasty

It's okay. The key point is why the author wrote so many virgins, and there are so many scoundrels in it. The protagonist doesn't want to kill you, but he lets them live for so long, and finally kills the protagonist. It's really awesome.

It makes me feel sad and angry,

Relying on the defense, completely relying on the defense, the characters' voices are unclear, the plots are sorted out one by one, and I don't know what is said or not. It is impossible to distinguish between what the author wants to express and what he wants to write. The key points are not explained in detail, and some things are written like a rag. I suggest the author think carefully about what he is thinking, what he wants to express, and how to express it. What he writes is exactly the same as a third-grade composition.

It's just that the ending is a bit sloppy.

It's worth seeing and can be considered.

Kindergarten assembly line operation

You have a cake, I really can't stand it, there is no logic, I feel that the protagonist is a bit stupid, I'm convinced