My Backyard Leads to Immortal Mountain

The author of this book is really attentive, the subject matter is well chosen, and the writing style is also good. However, the length is short, and the plot of the protagonist should continue to be cultivated. Creation is not easy, so come on, author!

What are you writing? Good for nothing, grinding and whining, a woman in the bank relies on her body to do business, and you can take a fancy to her. The main character is silly and sweet. No wonder there are not many comments. This kind of novel seems like a waste of time.

Really good!

The author was advised to stop writing novels, otherwise he would starve to death, and go to the construction site to move bricks... Isn't it delicious?

Good

The title of the book is useless. If you don't practice properly, you always use ambiguity. There are too many ambiguous descriptions, which crowds out the space of the main line. The main thing is not cultivation. Everything else is just a cloud, and the beauty is a pink skull. Either you will become a scumbag after practicing, or you will practice vigorously and prosper in the real world. The writing is very nondescript. It cannot be improved or cultivated. It is depressing to look at it and I cannot find any joy.

It's not interesting at all. What the hell are you writing about now?

It's quite boring. I don't know how to describe it. There are too many complaints. I don't know why it has such a high rating. Do you all like this one now?? The male protagonist looks like a fool

I'm so speechless. I've read dozens of chapters, and I've lost all my virginity. I can't stand it anymore.

I admire your courage. I heard someone say that you can publish a book if you can write.