One Piece: Living to See Another Day

After reading Chapter 17, emmm, what can I say? It feels like the diary of a boy with a middle school disease. The details of the battle are almost mentioned in one stroke, and the characters are also blurry. It feels weird after reading it for a long time.

1. The plot does not match the title and theme. 2. The first person makes the reader feel uncomfortable. 3. The author's writing is not good. 4. One Piece is a very violent world. The author's writing is too bland and there are no fierce battle scenes. 5. Without Luffy, Ace, and Whitebeard, would the pirates still be pirates?

I've tried the poison, and overall it's pretty good. It's first person, like writing a diary✍

Why do you keep using me? It feels like writing a diary

It's uncomfortable to use the first person pronoun "me". It would be better if the author used his first name instead.

Can't stand it

It's always me, me, me, I don't want to read the diary

First person novel, it's so disgusting to read

You are writing the text here.

I am also going to the new world to gather teammates, so I am flying solo.