The Supreme Immortal Venerable of the City

It's so confusing! One minute he's at home, the next his mother is running a small stir-fry shop, and then he's avenging Zhao Ran. What's going on? After Zhao Ran went to find Qin Mu at the conference, there was no further mention of him. I really don't understand. And wasn't he already very rich and his parents were cultivating immortality before? Why is he acting like this now? I'm completely dumbfounded.

I'm starting to doubt if you wrote this. Didn't you write about teaching his parents how to cultivate immortality? But when I got to the 300th page, his parents were actually beaten up by some thugs. I was totally dumbfounded.

I'm sick of reading novels. The beginning is tedious, but it's just normal pretentious writing, so I patiently read it. How come everything changed after he went out? Weren't his parents supposed to be cultivating? Why are they running a noodle shop again? I tried hard to recall the previous plot, but I just can't connect the dots...

He even entrusted his parents with the task of cultivating himself, so why did he stop later? And wasn't his mother from the Wu family in the capital? How did she later become a rural person? What are you writing here?

Too many typos

Is your writing all jumbled up? If you can't connect the dots, don't write.

A genius writes a book; a genius reads it. I'm just a mortal, I can't understand it.

Chapter 338: Something's not right after returning home. The protagonist's parents live in villas and are cultivating immortality, so how come they're just ordinary people running a small restaurant?

Sharp

The plot is incoherent and riddled with typos.