The Apocalypse Is Here: I’m Stockpiling Like Crazy

I think it's great. Both the system rewards and the tasks perfectly resonate with me. However, I feel there's one shortcoming: the female lead. She seems impatient with the male lead. I hope she can understand him better and be more patient later on.

I've found that forced options are always unfriendly to the woman. This is the second book I've read with a system like this for the woman; it's very frustrating. This system is always mocking her, and it feels like it looks down on her—why is it even binding her? Every time she resists, this happens.

Looks good ( •̀∀•́ )

This is so pathetic, so frustrating. It's the apocalypse, you could die at any moment. You're powerless, and even if you were, you'd still be a dog. I wouldn't want a system that calls me "daddy." Author, are you a guy? You projected your own patheticness onto the protagonist, so you're siding with him. In the apocalypse, you can't be ruthless and decisive; you have to be a saint. Aside from the protagonist, a normal person wouldn't survive three chapters.

It looks good!

Chapter Confusion

Who could possibly write something like that?

The female protagonist is a saint

Hmm... The beginning was pretty good, but around chapter 252 it got tangled up, jumping into other novel stories for about 3 or 4 chapters, skipping one chapter at a time. This interruption made the plot disjointed! That's really annoying. Also, I quite like the character Fang Zaitian, but as someone in the protagonist's group, his writing is the least polished among them (besides that monkey).

It's alright, but there are quite a few typos. The female lead's character is a bit unlikable.