Datang: Li Er Eavesdropped on His Voice at the Beginning

It kind of sucks!

Stop reading, everyone. As a time traveler, doesn't the protagonist still know the ins and outs? And the protagonist who comes from Tubo and kisses her actually agrees with the statement, he actually agrees, haha, he is also a time traveler, it's a shame not to watch it

At 8 years old, a primary school student rules the world? Logically, it is rather ill-considered and lacks foreshadowing and logic. Even if it is time-travel, 8-year-old is not an age that can be independent. In fact, it can be slightly processed to make it more logical. For example, it is more appropriate to time-travel to an 8-year-old child and dormant until the age of 16 or 18, and accidentally discover the talent.

The plot is overall exciting, but occasionally people's names are mistakenly written as other or even unrelated words, such as "Li Shimin" → "Li Shimin". But the faults do not hide the faults, and the many solutions given by Machiavellian are reasonable.

Can the author be more serious and stop writing nonsense all day long?

It was fine in the front, but after I left for Yizhou, the system became useless and I had no idea what was going on.

I gave up. It was okay at first, but I couldn't bear to let Li Min marry his eldest grandson Pinting. Is there no girl? There won't be another girl to marry as a concubine. Is it possible that if there is a girl, all of them will be Li Min's? I'm speechless.

The male protagonist calls Li Shimin his father and scolds the dog as a ****. What kind of mentality does the author have? His views are incorrect.

What are you writing? The title doesn't match.

There are all typos, the relationships between the characters are confusing, and even my mother got it wrong at the end of the writing. The writing is so bad. If you don't know how to write, don't write. It's really disgusting!