Bound to National Fate: This World Was Designed by Me?

It's not bad, the protagonist's IQ is online, but the slap-in-the-face plot is a bit routine. I didn't really like the part about teaching Shen Lingyun in the middle period. Personally, I thought it was a bit shaky, but overall it wasn't a big problem. It's a classic cool type of writing, so you can take a look.

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Not bad, not bad, really good, good, good, good. . . At least I'm satisfied with the protagonist's character

It's not this little piece of shit. It was quite good to watch at first, but every time I get to those parts, I don't want to watch it anymore. The host can't find such a fool, right? Isn't this a fool from both inside and outside Chongyang? I'm speechless, it would be better if I didn't have this Zhang Xiaoxiao

Worth a look

First of all, it ends very suddenly (I skipped to the end halfway through and found that it was over suddenly) Then Zhang Xiaoxiao, the commentator, has obviously been in trouble. The country didn't replace him and allowed him to belittle the protagonist and spread negative remarks. The plot is repeated. Every time the audience sees the protagonist's actions and feels that he is cold, but the protagonist fights back again. The character is stupid. Once or twice, you can think that the protagonist is lucky, but more than ten times, you still subjectively think that the protagonist is a noob who just has good luck, and you have to fight against him. It's cool, but it's not bad to watch without thinking.

There are a lot of typos and it's a mess.

It's a very ordinary novel, not really a good read, but I'm very confused. Why was it possible to be attacked by a mid-level 2 player at level 3 and still get the box robbed? I don't understand, do you have to help him drag the boss? What about level 3 speed? What about means? The high-level 2 level described earlier was as low as a second, and the intermediate level was like a dog without daring to say a word. Now a mid-level 2 level can do this? For the time being, let's just look at it. The protagonist can't skip levels. You developed the game yourself, but you can still be so stupid. I think of a very funny comment. Except for the protagonist, he has no brain. But does the protagonist really have one? The writing is invincible and overbearing, but I really don't understand why the novels like Qimao are so boring. They are timid, grinding, and getting more and more annoying. They can't understand the plot, carry a nuclear bomb to pretend to be a grandson, and even a villain can be stunned. Is the author really a human and not an AI? I'm very curious. All authors can be so stupid. It's NB's fault.

I could obviously still write it down, but it's a pity

The transition of the plot is smooth, but it's a pity that it's unfinished, but it may also be a foreshadowing for the next book.