Traveling Frog: a Burning Fruit at the Beginning and I Blew up the Classroom

This book written by the author is very nice and interesting. The first is through the protagonist's care of the frog cubs. The character traits of the protagonist are written on the side. The description of the characters is not vivid enough. But the author wrote about the "divine frog's effusion" here, and did not let the protagonist persuade the heroine. But overall, I still highly recommend this book.

The ending was a bit too fast, and the finale was a bit hasty. Overall, it was pretty good. It could have been praised, but it ended badly.

Quite interesting.

It's pretty good, it would be better if the sister was deleted.

The god frog accumulates fluid. The protagonist feels disgusting, so he doesn't eat it himself and feeds it to someone else (that person may be the heroine, but no one in this world knows. Only the protagonist knows it's a sperm). Anyway, what you are expressing is that you want to eat, why don't the protagonist give some advice?

It's pretty good. It ended a little quickly. I should continue writing.

The author is very thoughtful, and the Traveling Frog system in the early stage is very interesting, but the characterization is a bit thin. Whether it is the heroine or the sister, throughout the whole text, there are no very distinctive features, including the protagonist's emotional line, which has a slow development process, but there is very little writing involved. In the later period, the author combined several major events in reality as the plot. The plot was clever and the writing was average. Finally, at the end, I felt that the plot was not interesting and ended hastily. This article has many interesting points, but the writing skills are limited. It is considered a good article, but the rating of 9.0 Feels too high.

He also killed Emperor Huang Tian and Emperor Ye Tian instantly. I guess it would be good if he could kill Tang San.

**One, I swallowed the fruit as soon as I got it. I didn't pay attention to the occasion. I didn't have any idea of ​​hiding my stupidity. The killers from the hostile forces will probably come over soon to assassinate me. Forget it, I don't bother to look at it.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, but he submitted too many things, and they all belong to Xiaowa. Some of the things that exploded belong to the protagonist, which is okay, but giving everything to Xiaowa is not good. Another idea is the ending. The ending is a 7 or 8 golden holy dragon. He summons a little frog and defeats it directly. This ending is too bad. There is also no process of getting number one on the national charts. In fact, there are still many things that can be written. Even if the world is invincible, you can still travel across the world. Just let Xiaowa take the protagonist to other worlds. There are still many things that can be written, but the author is just too lazy to write. The imagination is okay, it's just a system, and what about Shenlong? It was agreed to keep a pet for the little frog, but the author did not describe it at all. How can I put it this way? The main text is pretty good, but the ending is terrible.