There’s a Demon Here

The first part is pretty good, both in terms of plot and setting. Although the divisions between levels are not clear, it does not affect reading. In the middle period, the protagonist's character and Wei Xuanyi's character suddenly collapsed. The straight man is not a fool, and he and Xiao Xia have already reached the point of holding hands. Wei Xuanyi is still pretending to be stupid, and there is no doubt that he is a scumbag. As a disciple of an aristocratic family, Wei Xuanyi has a nice and carefree personality. However, he is forced to hide a lot of details that are both wise and foolish. However, he is also impulsive and brainless. His character traits are not grasped well and the twists are abrupt. He just ruins the cute and cheerful Wei Xuanyi into a willful, reckless and brainless character. I can't stand it anymore.

I read more than five hundred chapters. How to say, average. Very average. The first is the biggest problem. The mind of the protagonist. As a young man of about twenty-two years old. The protagonist is poor in both EQ and IQ. The character is too average, has no tendency, and does not look like a teenager. And the more I write later, the more childish and blunt it becomes. It makes me feel that this is not a book I should read at my age. The relationship between men and women is also a mess, and the emotional lines are inexplicable. If you can't write well, I suggest you just choose one. How can you pretend to be innocent when you are in your twenties? Shaped by the world view, the entire society, as well as people, are completely like a fairy tale world, with a feeling of being separated from reality. The story is told in a straightforward manner, which makes me feel that there is no passion, tragedy, cruelty, passion, touching, etc. The protagonist is like a character in a painting. There is no personality tendency, no youthful passion, and no drive. No goals, no ideals, no brains, no lust, no greed for money, no desires, not even perseverance. Really bland. But the book clearly wants to portray some feelings of family and country, some sacrifices, some ambitions, and some passion. All I can say is that I have no empathy. Emotional communication is the biggest weakness. In terms of family relationships, the parents are not described. They have no feelings but have a grudge against Uncle Li. There is no emotional explanation for the little fat man, but they are caring. Love is a mess, childhood sweethearts are ambiguous, and when he meets a woman, he is a hero who saves her beauty, and then falls in love with her. In terms of friendship, one is growing up, there is not much foreshadowing, and the foreshadowing is cliche. It's about life or death. Anyway, the book can probably be given a 7. The story line is okay, the logic is good, and the world view is not a big problem. I also hope to bring in my own good views. To change people, the weakness is in character image creation and emotional communication. Precisely when I haven't written the emotions and images well, I desperately want to explain something very emotional. It makes people unable to empathize. Finally, most people who read books hope that the protagonist will at least have confidence and a sense of belief in themselves. And the characters are more dynamic. The main character is so silly and cute. Not like a man, more like a child.

A new work by Silent Steps, well written and worth a read

When I saw the part where the protagonist rescued the little yellow dog, I felt that the protagonist's position was not clear at all. One moment he was a human priest, and the other moment he rescued the dog that killed three people. Of course those people who were killed were at fault, but then the dog killing was right? I saved it just because I knew this dog, not for the human race, but for myself.

When I reach 90, I can't stand it anymore. I don't know who I am. I am just awesome... It's not systematic and it makes no sense... Create a mystery about the priest, but don't explain it, and keep mentioning it... 13 Ah. Too 13

All I can say is that it's a masterpiece. The writing is very good and has a strong sense of immersion. There are also many jokes in it.

To be honest, the protagonist, as a harmless priest, was protected by Xu Qingzhi who sacrificed his life in the past, and was cared for by the Demon Suppression Department later. He took the protagonist to see the experiences of the priests in the four buildings, which all reflected the righteous feelings of the predecessors in suppressing demons and protecting the people. Establishing faith contains a lot of truth, but I still lack the experience of slaying demons. Everything is about talking more and doing less. It takes too long. As a priest, I use the methods of demons to practice sword skills. I think it is very unnecessary. It is better to think about how to improve the power of the priest. The power of the priest against the demon soul and demon realm can be fully used in the form of teamwork. After all, the magic industry has specialization, which can also reduce the growth time.

Nice. So beautiful, so beautiful.

I've read dozens of chapters and can't understand anything.

What was written in Little Yellow Dog is true, but I felt it was stiff. . . There is no resonance for the sensationalism, the passion is unknown, and the protagonist who insists on going his own way is really out of his wits.