Survival on a Deserted Island

The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It uses the description of the environment to set off the mood of the characters, which is very artistic. Start concisely. Readers can have a deep impression of the characters as soon as they meet them, from the deserted island to the ruined city, such as Qin Xiyuan's good at pleasing others, and her gradual change after the death of her child, Yang Xiaohua's diligence, Yao Qiaoyun, the national princess, Su Xinxu, the aristocratic woman, and Yunshuang, the sports expert. (The child has not yet been born), Dolma, an Indian who is good at hunting, Aluna, who helped the protagonist when she was in the most danger, and thus fell, Park Yoon-ah, the Goguryeo star, Sun Li, Wu Xiangxiang, and Zhou Xiaoli, these three were originally with the two Lin brothers on the desert island, and then defeated the Lin brothers and fell in love with the protagonist. Dolma, the leader's wife, the woman whom Ilona originally married, and Lin Xiaoyan, who is known as the "eldest sister" among the pirates. Afterwards, I came to a new land and met Lin Luoyan, Ai Liqie, Liu Xiaoqian, Ouyang Shuang, Ake, Ayun, Amy, Zhao Min, He Xin, the military god, L's tail and many other female protagonists or female supporting characters, each with their own age and characteristics. The supporting characters such as Azite Mu, Wu Xun, and Keya, as well as the villains such as Fang Sitang and Wu Xun, are vividly portrayed, fascinating and attract readers. The article is vivid and detailed. He spoke to us in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is endlessly memorable. There is a fly in the ointment, there are too many typos. It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. As a human being, failure is inevitable, but having the courage to face failure is even more valuable. I believe that gold will always shine. I hope you adjust your mentality as soon as possible and you will find that the sky is bluer.

What the hell? I can still deal with the first half, but I will just read the last chapter of the second half. It's boring. Anyone who is lucky enough to see this price should stop wasting time and choose other quality books!

After reading Chapter 25, the male protagonist has been a soldier, but when the villain comes out, it is difficult to take action because the opponent has a gun. The key is that he has no idea of ​​resistance. His own woman took the initiative to be slept with by the villain, and when she was being played with, the male protagonist could only grit his teeth and clenched his fists😄. Later, Shit Luck got a gun and was afraid of various problems, so he could only catch the villain with the help of other women. Then he said he wanted to kill in a deserted place, but he ran away. After returning, the woman who the villain slept with went to flirt with the male protagonist, and the male protagonist kissed him directly, not afraid that the villain An Muxi was not clean from the woman's mouth. How did the author write such a story about a useless male protagonist and aggrieved person?

The relationships between some of the characters in the latter part are confusing.

The writing is wrong and there is a lot of verbosity and nonsense. This novel can be said to be the worst written, and it is unbearable to read.

Good-for-nothing male protagonist plus licking dog

Incompetent male protagonist

A person who was born as a soldier has a simple mind and poor tactics. He only thinks about asking flowers and willows all day long. The writing of this book is not good. The plot is not meticulous and caressing the grass, so it is not worth watching.

Too shaky

Why keep it? Can't we solve it directly? Let him go and never come back. I really don't know what the author is thinking.