After Wearing the Book, You Can Continue to Live by Relying on the Luck of the Boss of Dongchang

How should I put it, if it were a five-star system, I would give it four stars, because in the early and middle stages, both the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist and the female protagonist's fight with other supporting characters were perfect, but what was not perfect was the end. I always felt that something was missing. Maybe it was the blank space left by the author? In fact, the male protagonist did not become the emperor. After all, when you become the emperor, you cannot have time every day, but I think it should be explained. Many endings are not explained. It feels that the writing is hasty, but in some aspects it is relatively complete. However, it is a novel with only 500 chapters. I feel that the ending should not be handled this way, but it is still a relatively good novel. I don't know if the author plans to write an extra chapter.

I thought it was a beautiful, strong and tragic heroine who was on her way to counterattack, but I didn't expect that she was just a weakling with overflowing sympathy. She didn't have much ability but she still wanted to save others. Oh, and she was still a love brain. Maybe I've read too many Shuang stories and felt that the heroine was being bullied and plotted all the time. She couldn't help but beg others, and then cried in despair, waiting for the hero to come and save her. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I become

Just one word "Alas😮‍💨"! The author's writing style is average, with too many repetitive words. The main line of the whole article is unclear, and the plot is protracted. The more you go to the end, the more you jump to read it. At the beginning, it said that the jade pendant should accumulate luck points to become the heroine, but in the end, did you forget it? The jade pendant matter just disappeared quietly. The heroine, as a modern book wearer, did not do anything. The hero even concealed his life experience until after marriage. He still did not tell the heroine about his last-minute plans. The heroine became angry at every suggestion, but she calmed down completely after being coaxed. The next few chapters were obviously rushed, and some pitfalls were not filled in. It was done in a hasty manner... It is suitable for reading without thinking.

It's very interesting to watch, there's no bloody plot, and the plot is smooth. I envy the love between Zhao Zhao and Xie Yu. There are still some holes that have not been filled. I'm looking forward to writing extras. ♡＾▽＾♡

Okay, except for the ending, which is a bit ridiculous, and the pitfalls haven't been filled in yet.

Many pitfalls are not filled in, and the ending is simply sloppy. The overall framework is good, but there are a few chapters that are outrageous and unbelievable. The ending is obviously cutting corners.

Open high and go low

Drive high and go low, dig holes but not bury them

The ending is too sloppy. So-so

It looks good, but there are too many jumps in the back.