The Young Master Goes to Court

The sentence "I miss my family even more during the festive season" is so long-winded that I wrote several chapters.

The protagonist's aura is very strong; the plot is mediocre and has no attraction; the women around the protagonist are all one-on-one, which feels a bit mindless; the ending is too fast and messy, and the later stages are skipped and watched, which is too boring.

The writing is not good, it has an IQ but no IQ, the characters are not good, the dialogue is a mess, the court is not court-like, and the sentences are not fluent.

Difference! Not so bad! Difference! Difference! Difference!

Come and read a time-travel novel! It turned out to be a mindless martial arts novel! Still the most annoying stallion novel! The shadow of modern people!

It can be said that the protagonist is very silly and brainless. The author's writing is so superficial that it's very boring to read.

There is too much nonsense, I have to explain a bunch of rubbish in one sentence and then continue talking. It is really tiring to read this kind of novel, so I deleted it.

Anticlimactic, the ending is too concise

There are too many typos and the name is often used in vain.

Literary talent needs to be improved