I Am Making a Pill in Another World

It's too long-winded, few of its sentences are useful, and it looks too laborious.

It's not within the rules of the story. It's just a random piece of writing. Some of the storylines are well written, but overall it's half-finished.

The male protagonist is already at the sixth level of Qi training. This book only talks about the Qi training level. Fighting does not require spells or martial arts? Such a big omission? ! You can be sure this is a scumbag book! Abandoned

It's too wordy, too repetitive, full of typos, and some sentences are incomprehensible.

Is this book not finished yet? Is there any follow-up?

Thousands of words are gathered into one sentence, the writing is smooth, the expression is clear, and the plot is exciting, but the ending is too rushed.

This book is not logically rigorous. There are too many bugs and the plot drags on.

Of the more than 300 episodes, a hundred are due to repetition. Over and over again, how come the story is so important that it has been told three times?

The plot is average. Repeat, repeat, repeat to make up the word count.