Emperor Hunyuan

Chapter 15: A woman asks two men to fight and whoever doesn't die will marry the other. A soldier travels back in time and is reborn and has to die for a prostitute. It's not good-looking.

The author's writing level needs to be improved. This is the flow of writing for middle school students.

It's just a running account with no focus. This is the worst book I've ever read, but I still have to encourage the author~~

Mu Feng Zuiyue, the super brainless dog licker, definitely grew up eating phlegm and drinking pus

It's a mess... Don't show off if you're not smart...

The biggest flaw of this book is that a killer travels back and forth as the protagonist. If you don't understand the world of a killer and can't write about it, can you give me some characteristics of a killer? It would be better to use someone else, such as a scholar. The war of genocide was as loud as a debate, it was like a debate A group of men are all sissies,

Sixty percent of fantasy books use the same old-fashioned formula, which makes me tired of reading it.

The description is cold and far-fetched, the exaggeration is uncontrolled, the plot is childish and boring, just like an old cow chewing wax, the more it writes, the more childish it becomes.

A bit ridiculous

The protagonist was formerly the number one killer in China, but he didn't have the personality of a killer at all. He is just an idiot, with no IQ, no strategy, overflowing with love, and hesitant to kill. This is the protagonist who was written by the author of this book and traveled through time as a killer. When the author was writing about a fight, he also wrote about both sides shouting out their martial arts and moves, which was a bit funny. A fight is a fight. If you use the word "shout" when writing about someone's move, it insults your intelligence.