The Crazy Husband of the Matriarchal World Takes His Child on the Run

How to say it? In fact, I like this kind of subject very much. I think the kind of love between the heroine and the hero is very enviable. I feel that they are different from others. They can choose without reservation. They believe in each other and are easy to choose. They believe in each other and stay together for life. In fact, I am also very satisfied with their final ending. So I hope the author will work harder and work harder. I hope he can write more good articles like this!

It's the first time to watch a man give birth, it's quite interesting

The ending was a bit too abrupt and it really progressed so fast. It's a pity that the Queen died in the end. Then the new queen was about five years old, and the heroine was withdrawn. Oh my god! The novel is really good, but it has a car but no process. Other novels can still keep my mind occupied, but this novel can be described in just one sentence. After talking about n secondary processes, the math teacher said that your novel failed and there was no process.

1. There are many wrong sentences and typos. 2. The writing style is immature, and the wording and sentence making are at the junior high school composition level. 3. The plot is strange, the structure of the article is unreasonable (sorry, I really don't know how to describe such a plot), the villain's reason for harming people is strange, and the protagonist's solution is strange, as if all the villains forcibly reduced their intelligence to set off the protagonist who is not very smart, and the heroine's halo and golden finger are really exaggerated to the point of not being logical. The foreshadowing of the heroine's identity starts from the beginning. Logically speaking, the climax of the whole story should be the heroine's search for her identity → recovery of her memory → fight for power. However, it only takes up dozens of chapters at the end. The first three hundred or so chapters are all about the heroine curing diseases and saving people everywhere. So why do you have so much foreshadowing? The second princess, a villain described by the author as a "venomous snake", died without causing any trouble, and her fighting ability is not as good as that of the villagers in the fishing village. The second prince is a bit yandere, paranoid and good at divination. This person has set up a well-designed villain boss, but this is the result? Give up after just one meal? Fluctlight's identity was rendered so mysterious. I thought there was still a plot, but it would be over with just "They don't recognize it"? And what about the plot of the Medical Association? Doesn't the heroine want to rectify the Medical Association? I don't think it's a big deal. The strangest thing is the background of the heroine's time travel, so the doctor sent the heroine to another world with an injection and tied it to a system? How did you come back? If the heroine dies in the original world, will she continue to travel? Will the system be destroyed along with it? Miao Jiang has appeared so many times, and he is featured in key plot points. He can be said to be the root of all cholera, but what about the ending? Is it solved? How to solve it? The heroine, a saint, is just a joke. It gave me the feeling that the author wanted to say everything, as if he had said everything, but in fact he said nothing. Summary: There are so many flaws that I can't say anything about it. If you are interested in the quality of the article, hurry up and give it an "average" rating. It's a thank you for your hard work.

I hope Lin Qingyan and Yu Su can make 100 million points of soy sauce🤤🤤

The female protagonist is dedicated and the male protagonist is also very good. A very nice book, I don't know why no one has read it 😣

Typos often appear, but they do not affect the overall reading. The first plot was okay, quite exciting, but the overall plot in the second part was very bland, and the writing was not particularly good. There was no desire to read on, so I gave it up.

Except for the fact that the title says it is a heroine, I really feel that it is not reflected in the whole novel. I really feel that the heroine is weak and the foreshadowing of the Holy Mother is buried and not filled in well (please don't comment if you don't like it personally)

I don't know why, but I always feel that the sentences are not very smooth, and the plot is not very good either. What kind of heroine time travels into another person. Then he is originally a person of this world. The identity of the heroine is not clear yet, it's so confusing! None of them look very good. (Only represents my personal opinion; don't argue, if you argue you are right)

The plot is good, but the war part in the middle is too long to watch. There weren't too many typos, but she/he couldn't tell the difference. I don't know if it was intentional or something, so it didn't give me a good impression.