The Blessed Farm Girl

The subject matter of the story is quite good. There is no room for cheating. The heroine made her fortune through her hard-working hands. However, I feel that the author's plot arrangement is not very reasonable. The heroine's abilities are not fully utilized, and the situation created feels relatively small. This should be the reason why the author's arrangement of the entire article is unreasonable. Generally speaking, the main reason is that when the author describes the male protagonist and the female protagonist, he repeats too much wordy language and feels a bit ink-stained. There are also too many typos and the names are often mixed up. Xia Mingming's name is Mr. Cheng Liu, but for some reason, his name is Ning Youyun. There are quite a few people named Su, Gu, Li, and Liu, all of which are confusing. Moreover, there is no result from the foreshadowing laid before, and the ending is quite sloppy. I hope the author can grasp the good subject matter, complete a good article seriously and reasonably, and hope that the author can come up with better works!

I'm so frustrated, I don't want to say anything

Not well written