The Farmgirl Has a Little Land

The story has no golden fingers, nothing particularly boastful, and it only talks about some things that are trivial in the family. However, the origin of the heroine is not clearly explained, and the heroine's predecessor is not explained in detail. The first half is okay, but the second half is a bit too wordy, the dialogue is also wordy, and there are too many irrelevant people writing. , For example, I wrote a lot about Phoenix, and Li Da's family. In fact, it would be better if the author wrote the game in a little more detail. The ending was also written a bit too hastily, and a lot of foreshadowing was not realized later. It feels like the writing is a bit anticlimactic. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and write more and better works.

Kissed,,. , Mm

The ending was too fast, too sudden, too simple. Nothing was explained clearly, and it just ended right away.

The end comes too soon,

Bad writing

It's good to watch, but the ending is a bit rushed. It's all about bickering and eating, and the protagonist's last few sentences just take over.