The Hidden Dragon of the City

The writing in the real book is quite wonderful. The male protagonist is very responsible, the female protagonist is also good, and the other supporting characters are written just right, with clear priorities. The male protagonist does not mess around, but takes action when it is time to take action. His own strength is also displayed. The unique visual sense of the writing during the fight gives It gives people a feeling of being on the scene. Later on, the plot turns around and the female protagonist has a higher level of cultivation than the male protagonist. This is a major feature. I look forward to Su Qi becoming a tigress who can control Wang Han to death. It is quite well written. I recommend reading it. Occasionally driving on the highway is also more attractive, hahaha. (I think the author is a high school student. He made a blind guess. The writing style is quite good. I recommend it to junior high school students. It involves some junior high school knowledge and so on, and it is well combined with the display.) Highly recommended

It's a good read, the story is exciting, and the logic is reasonable. The key is not to read about a stallion, but to have a positive outlook on life. His wife, their siblings, a few old men, and his good friends all like him so much. They all have different personalities and vivid images!

Although I don't like harem stories, the writing is okay. At least the male protagonist is not like those who deliberately hide things and lick them. The male protagonist is quite domineering.

It seems that the author does not understand some things very well. It was okay at the beginning, but why did I become more and more strange in the middle and later? I don't want to say anything bad, but I just want to say something to the author. After understanding it thoroughly, I will change it. It will be helpful to you, as well as the characters, plot, and things that need to be developed.

This book not only has a wonderful plot, but also the author's writing is very good. I really recommend everyone to read it. Although the protagonist does not have invincible strength, nor is he the most talented in the book, his character and temper are very in line with my taste, and the author updates it four times a day. It is very enjoyable. Highly recommended!

Hidden Dog in the City, the plot is incomprehensible and drags on. The author likes to keep people's appetites for dozens of chapters, which means you have to read a hundred chapters before you can see the plot you want. But you don't know that this is just a drop in the bucket of the author's appetite. This book can only be said to be written as it comes, and there is no plot flow. It takes more than 300 chapters for the hero and heroine to know the details of each other. What's even more exaggerated is that the heroine who has been pregnant for more than 300 chapters has nothing to do with her. Everyone should do what they should do. I suspect that the author has forgotten this. When he couldn't understand the writing, a so-called "old man" appeared in the article and suddenly inserted a plot. In the end, he inserted a paragraph and inserted a paragraph. In the end, he couldn't understand the whole story. The last sentence was to read the first few chapters and give up as soon as possible. The procrastination of the subsequent plot will make readers want to vomit, and they don't dare to think about the subsequent plot. I estimate that I can write as many words as possible.

I don't understand, how could a very good book get an 8.9 Score? You can't give it a low score just because the name has something like Long Ao Astronomy. Maybe the early stage was a bit mediocre, no different from ordinary cool articles, even when it was written to slap the Qin family in the face. The names were sometimes mixed up, but the more I read about it, the better it looks. There are a lot of foreshadowings, and the writing is not particularly good, but the plot is exciting, and the foreshadowings are slowly revealed. It is not like other novels where a bunch of foreshadowings are just one thing. I may have forgotten it. In comparison, I think this is definitely a good book. I believe that the main reason why most people abandon the book is that the name was confusing in the early stage, and the heroine was forced to lose her wits. She was already south of the pool, but after reading that chapter After the part, the layout of the emperor, as well as Wang Han and Imperial Master Qiu Chi, as well as Yang Yu'e, the identities of the ten elders, Zhenlong Palace, the God of War, the mother body and the divine spine, and the story of the upper clan slowly unfolded, the most important thing is Shutong, and "I" Chase (Of course, these two are not in the main plot yet) I remember reading this book because the book Chase has not been updated, so I just randomly found a fun article to read. (The kind that changes after reading a hundred or two.) When I saw the part related to the Su family in the previous chapter, it also related to the big one. Like some people, I can basically guess the plot of pretending to slap people in the face, and I feel a bit mentally retarded. But as I slowly read it, I really feel that this is a good book, and the author is not very good. Some authors may only have a thousand words per chapter. But River God definitely has enough updates for each chapter (occasionally I owe a few, or even no updates at all). I rarely write book reviews, but today I accidentally saw the score of 8.9 And thought of writing some reviews. I hope some cat friends will stick with it after reading it. Later, there are those who think the book is not good to read. I think there is no need to attack the readers (those who are mentally retarded like this book, who can read it, the people who read this book are probably ⅹⅹ, and they also say it is good to read). Finally, I hope you will not criticize me☺️

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The female protagonist is a bitch, the male protagonist is not decisive enough, and is just a doormat in front of the female protagonist, who is always looked down upon and scolded by.

Let's give it a fair evaluation. Overall, it's okay to give this book a 9. 1. In terms of character creation, apart from the fact that Gou Han is really a coward in the early stage and Su Qi is too prejudiced, the other plots are also good. Each character has his own characteristics, which is very good and easy to remember. 2. In terms of the combat power system, the internal strength is indeed written in detail, but I didn't expect that there is such a large space for Gou Han to improve. I feel that I can omit it a little. In terms of external strength, I only wrote about the nine-turn Vajra realm. He Shen can add a little more. This would be better 3. As for the plot, you have to make up the number of words. If you don't write a side plot to let the protagonist improve his combat power, if you pick up some equipment, you can't write the main plot at all. If you don't use the big character, you can't play it. If you use the big character, you won't recognize your relatives. The BOSS is too strong, so I can only write branch lines to provide combat-exploding equipment, but I hope that the River God branch line can be written faster, and don't always write barrage comments, which drags out the plot and no one likes to read it. 4. There is nothing to say about the layout. Everyone has what they should do, and everything can be done correctly before and after. It seems that each wave of people does different things, which is very messy and nonsensical, but if you dig deep, you can connect them together. There is nothing to say about the River God in this regard, it is very powerful. Finally, the most important thing is that I hope He Shen can add updates one or two days a week. The requirement is not high, just add two chapters each time.