The Doomsday Devourer

It's not bad, but it's too messy, with one end in the east and one in the west! It feels a bit like a witch searching for the truth. The protagonist's search for gods comes to an end? Wander around various small worlds, big worlds, and underground worlds!

Very good, it has a head start!

Too messy? You wrote it

Not too bad! It's just that the jumps are a bit big and a bit messy.

I read dozens of them and found the plot to be very bland. I wandered around without any purpose and wrote about where I was going. After I came back to the tenth level of the apocalyptic black iron and finished it in three days, I just had to find the bloodline of the gods. It didn't look good. The relationship line also progressed too fast. Can I have a relationship with an elf just because they speak the same language? There is no foreshadowing at all. No matter how you look at it, I can't stand it. No matter how exciting it is, it has nothing to do with me.

I'm 18 years old and don't like watching Madonna

The story is written in a very unique way, giving viewers a sense of humor. There are no slap-in-the-face plots, and there is a relaxed atmosphere of traveling alone and making friends everywhere. But this also results in a situation where there are no highlights in this book. There is zero sense of main line, the protagonist has a weak sense of growth, and the storyline is very jumpy. If you don't read it carefully, you will feel like you are watching another story.

The plot is a mess

I thought it was really a Weishi novel, this is a development novel, and that kind of weird people would let the protagonist have trouble. Then why not just tell the monster not to move and let the protagonist kill it?

The expression skills are so bad, the Devouring skill is useless, the author can't describe it, and the fighting scenes are not good either.