Crime Scene

The suspenseful reasoning when solving the case is exciting and unforgettable

Too many cases are copied from Detective Conan. People can tell who the deceased is by looking at the beginning of some cases. At the beginning, they also write that they are cases that they have encountered in their working life, which is not realistic at all.

The plot is exciting, exciting, and the reasoning is very good.

Fine

I have translated Ke Lan's reasoning into a book. It seems that the author is also average.

The deceased, Shen Lin, had a baby just one month old when he died, but the autopsy revealed that he was two months pregnant. How could it be possible that he was pregnant again before the baby was born? So awesome! !

I haven't finished reading the first case, but let me talk about the problems in it. The first female deceased, No. 1, Discovered that she was three months pregnant just about a month after giving birth. Second, the murderer Li Si jumped out on his own before the police found any key clues. Third, the acquaintance between the murderer and the two female victims was briefly mentioned.

I read the first story. I feel like there are too many unreasonable things in the article. They are all marked in the text. Maybe it's because this is an outline the author has just drafted. Many holes have yet to be filled. I hope the author can make some changes. I really can't stand it anymore, sorry. The author's language is smooth. The plot can also lead the way below. But for criminal investigation novels. The rigor of the story is particularly important. Like the first point, if the identity of the protagonist is to be reasonable, a lot of text and plot introduction are needed. In addition, the clues of the two cases were collected, including the murderer's fingerprints, DNA, footprints, poisons, pathology, poisoning techniques, possible nearby witnesses, escape routes, murder weapons, and vehicles. Method of information transmission. Network of relationships. Waiting for a while is simple. Personal evaluation: "I write articles just because I want to write articles." This is not necessary. I hope the author will read more articles and film and television works of the same type. Slowly enrich the clue collection and case handling process. Improve the rationality of the protagonist's identity. Then I can write good works. Expect!

Generally

The author writes very vividly, and it's nice to read anyway