Kill the Immortal

In the early stage, every time the male protagonist's wife was in danger, the male protagonist would let her go first and then she would run back. She would cry and cry, which was a bit annoying. She would run back and say that she didn't want to leave you alone, and then cry.

This book is really great! Although there are a lot of typos, the overall structure and content are very good. It's just Zhang Yiqing, what is the identity of the male protagonist's father? (Recommended recommended recommended)

You are just making things up, whatever you are writing, China's traditional culture has been corrupted by your self-righteous things! ! !

I hope the author can correct the typos in the book.

Thoughts need to be let loose. The author is not thinking in reverse, it is simply a mess and a random fabrication.

Why is there a boring foreshadowing in every chapter? Isn't it annoying?

Seeing this, I found that the male protagonist is always absent-minded. . I was convinced┗┃ ■ ┃┛And he looked silly

What was written in the ending? The beginning was fine, but in the ending, you didn't understand many things and you were in a hurry to have a baby?

What does the big fish want? I ask you.

The author is really too imaginative and the writing is messy. I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. It's so bad! 👎