The Primordial Heavenly Sage

A book with great potential. The melodrama of the story is not cliche, and the characters are vividly drawn. There can be more psychological activities and detailed descriptions. A book with great potential. The storyline is not cliche, the characters are vividly drawn, and the characters' personalities, behaviors, and other aspects are well developed. Like Hua Qianyu's transformation, Yang Ji's smile in Chapter 84, etc. I liked some of the plots very much. When I saw Chai fooling the beauty with Xiao Muyang's music, I thought about how quick it would be to expose him. Then the chapters about the party were included. The foreshadowing is very good *▽*. My suggestion is that you can describe more psychological activities and details, you can dig more holes (foreshadowing), and you can also set up a subordinate who is like a behind-the-scenes boss, contact Xiao Muyang, and reveal the reversal at the end. Set up some suspense and puzzles for readers to figure out. All in all, very good. Let's do it (°Д°)Ъ! (I hope you can see it and give me a like_(눈_눈‖∠)_kneel)

The good thing is that the characters in this book do not just rewrite the protagonist's adventures and experiences like other novels, but also write some adventures on others. The only shortcoming is that there are few writings about the spiritual practice experiences of brothers and friends, and there are too few vignettes at the end of the articles to pave the way for what follows. Overall, this book is very good. It surprised me. The brotherhood in it is also very delicate, which is more in line with my taste!

Just reading the first few dozen chapters, I feel that there are too many women appearing, and they are all related to the protagonist, and they have the flavor of harem and stallion. The protagonist loses consciousness when he sees women. As a bookworm, I am particularly disgusted by harem and stallion stories. In addition, I feel that some words are used inappropriately.

The writing is good, but the protagonist is a little weak. The weaker the protagonist, the more delicate the novel will be. Thank you to the author, it's very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The more I watch, the more I am confused. The protagonist is a treacherous person who takes benefits but does nothing. He pays attention to revenge when there is hatred and not repaying favors. I have a grudge, because of the protagonist's halo, it's okay. If a favor is not repaid, the other party will have an opinion and become an enemy.

No updates for two days! One update is only one chapter, it's too long!

The author, please arrange more female protagonists. Two or three are enough, otherwise it will be too monotonous. The book is very good, but there are too few female protagonists!!!

Advantages: The storyline develops slowly and is very comfortable to watch. Disadvantages: There is too little description of the exercises, and there is no surface in the gap between levels. Sometimes in order to make up for the highlights, it is inevitable to dig some holes, which makes people confused. For example, the prince uses the academy to deal with the Ye family who are loyal to him. Later, some chapters are needed to explain. However, the protagonist's talent is too exaggerated, and he will go to a wider place later. If he fixes the flaws, there will be more chapters.

The new book is selling like crazy!

Can the author create a character named Wujiang? I hope it's a villain, the kind that takes a few hits before dying.