The Peerless God of War in the City

The writing is very good, the story line is clear, and the plot is concise and not procrastinating. The disadvantages are: first. The improvement of the protagonist's ability is too simple and there is no resistance. Second, the ending is not exciting. It foreshadows and exaggerates the strength of the opponent, but the ending widens the gap between the abilities of the protagonist and the opponent. As a result, the opponent appears to be too weak at the end, inconsistent with the previous text, and the plot is not rich enough, and a lot of visual sense is lost.

A combination of ancient and modern cultures, the plot is ups and downs and confusing. Although the protagonist has experienced hardships and vicissitudes of life, there is always a bright future. Although it is a lifetime legend, it is also a lifetime experience. Therefore, after watching it, people have the idea of ​​not wanting to quit midway. Good books, good books.

I just read the first chapter, and I just want to ask why his brother is so powerful and the army does not provide him with subsidies or protection? Or maybe his brother was working in the army for nothing and had no money to send home! It doesn't make sense. Such a powerful younger brother, but his older brother died tragically and lived in a shabby house.

I can't comment on how bad it is. Not only did Dangtang Zhenbeiwang fail to defeat a company in a third-tier city, but it almost killed me. I couldn't even support a company. If you ask me, in other books, at least one of the protagonists does not reveal his identity. Even if it is a far-fetched reason, this book does not have it. If I were him, I would tell them directly that Ling Xiaoran is the niece of King Zhentian. If King Zhentian wants revenge, why not just let the Wuhu Group disband and face the mastermind behind the scenes?

The entire article revolves around one thing, ranging from sadness to anger to joy, excitement, and touching. In this way, readers can feel the protagonist's inner emotions from sadness to emotion, giving readers an immersive feeling. Great! "It's just that the plot is a bit lacking." Endless aftertaste! Ha ha

The male protagonist is written as a second bitch who only knows how to show off.

Is a little policewoman so awesome? The director's words are not good, the city secretary's words are not good, and the military region chief's words are not good. May I ask the author? This is simply nonsense.

To be honest, the cliche plot is disgusting

Modern classic writing routines. Strong → Revenge → Low-key → Pretentious → End. Classic novel-like structure. From fighting scumbag to fighting supreme. The point! More than one wife

What's weird, on vacation, not wearing a police uniform, not carrying a gun, but wearing handcuffs? Could it be that this female police officer likes to do exciting things at home all day?