Surviving on a Deserted Island with a Beautiful Young Lady

It's incredibly verbose.

Too wordy

The story was good, I really liked it.

Bad review. Why does it keep revealing the plot? It keeps saying "then what happened," which is no fun at all.

The evil first-person perspective

I read this novel a long time ago. The plot was good, but it was a bit wordy.

What about his first love? Author, I think you should write a side story to properly depict him and his first love.

After reading a few chapters, I felt it was becoming more and more fragmented, and the more I read, the less I wanted to continue. I advise everyone not to read it anymore.

>I've read it. The main characters in the novel "I Have a Super Island" are Fang Cheng and Li Qingman. It's well-written; I recommend you read it. The logic is strong, convincing, and well-developed. As for your novel, I can only give it a bad review. ...

It flows more smoothly than other novels!