The Wildest Ancestor in History

In my opinion, the biggest shortcoming of this book is that the identity is revealed too early in the early stage, which makes some plots in the later period not so good. Moreover, the eldest apprentice and other apprentices are all in a mess, and everything is always in decline, and then the protagonist saves them one by one. It feels like an uncomfortable feeling. If I had commented earlier, I would sincerely ask the author to improve it. Those who turn around and rebuild are generally low-key and only kill when they cause trouble. But you, I feel a little confused. Why do you pretend to be a fool in the first place? With his strength, it seems that he has been practicing since he was born. It seems that he does not need to pretend to be a fool. Reading the plot from here is a bit confusing. Secondly, I read it for a long time. Although I only read the first few hundred chapters, I also browsed some chapter titles. I basically didn't understand who the heroine was. There was a feeling that people couldn't understand. Is this actually a kind of uniqueness? Although your title is aimed at the most crazy ancestor, it does not give people a good writing experience. Of course, your writing style is good, but your structure is not well conceived. If the author wants to publish the next book, I suggest you think more about it and think about what is unreasonable and improve it. For example, why did he pretend to be a fool when he was so strong in the early stage? These are some plots that people can't understand. If you have to write them down, I suggest you add some explanations and hope the author can adopt them!!!!!!!!!

Great, great! The literary talent is really great. A novel with a relatively complete worldview, special bonus points. Everyone will have specific expressions and dynamics when they arrive at a specific scene, which makes people feel particularly immersed. It's caused by too many characters. I want to portray them all, but after they are completely portrayed, the number of subsequent appearances is too few. However, this characteristic of this kind of novel about cultivating immortality comes from the protagonist's pretense. It seems that we are all the protagonists, but we are not invincible. Sometimes we will be hurt, and our insights will be deep. This is indeed the first novel about cultivating immortality for newcomers.

There are at least 8-10 "er"s in each chapter. The author seems to be short of words. Every time I listen to the book, I get a little excited when I hear the word "er". The plot is exactly the same as other fantasy books. After reading more than ten chapters, there is no highlight. Bad review, bad review, bad review!

The author put down his pen and breathed a sigh of relief: "Finally finished." The book friends who were watching were curious about what this book was like. After reading it, they all laughed one by one, and many even made fun of: "Why are there people watching wherever the protagonist goes?" "No, and no matter what the protagonist does, there will always be someone to answer, and there will be three or four sentences at a time." "Of course, and the protagonist laughs every day, inexplicably and evilly." "Even if the protagonist doesn't show any strength, the decent ones will believe in him without hesitation. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, the villains won't take it seriously." "There are dozens or hundreds of geniuses at every turn, and the protagonist casually kills a group of geniuses. Genius is a unit of measurement, right?" (I saw Chapter 238 and can't stand it any longer. Sorry, farewell)

I think the beginning of this book is very good. The writing style is exactly what I imagined. There are sects and so many disciples. The most important thing is that there is a foreshadowing similar to that of the heroine. I thought it was well written, but after reading more than a hundred chapters, I couldn't read it anymore. I always feel that there are some shortcomings, and it is still stuck at more than a hundred chapters. I hope the author will continue to work hard and cheer for you! 'I don't often write comments, I hope you understand'

I thought it was quite interesting at first. There are more than 3,000 chapters in total. I have read more than 2,000 chapters and I still feel like I am still getting started. . . Each chapter is not much different. It takes more than 2,000 chapters to find a Tianluo, and more than 1,000 chapters to destroy a Tiangu. . .

To be honest, I have only read 500 chapters so far. I would like to ask if the author was anxious when writing? I can remember at least 50 errors (context errors, word errors). The most speechless one was when Lin Tian went to fight the mountain monster. As soon as the mountain monster appeared, the boys actually shouted: Let him see how powerful we humans are. I am full of questions, and the author's writing style is honestly at the level of a junior high school student. How long has Lu Huang been at the Tomb Gate, and the author has forgotten about him. However, the huge world view, various magic weapons, and the setting of the protagonist are very attractive to me. I am very much looking forward to the plot of Lin Tian meeting an old friend. In short, although this book has been completed, I hope the author can polish it.

I have read more than 2,000 chapters, and I felt good at first. The setting of immortals, demons, and ghosts is very large. I thought that there would be a different plot in another place, but it has always been just a mouthful. Unexpectedly, more than 2,000 chapters are still the same routine in the mortal world. I changed the name and map, but the plot routine has never changed. The whole process is a mouthful of words, there is no detailed description, and no sense of immersion. I don't know how I read it. It's a waste of time and mood. I won't read it anymore. I abandon the article. Even this kind of article can be so popular. I feel like I have been cheated.

The beginning of the article is very shocking, and it is like a cheating artifact that makes readers feel very happy to read it. This is also the meaning of this kind of article, but it feels that it is not precise enough. There are many typos or incorrect language structure in the article. Overall, the protagonist's growth path is very shocking. The central clue revolves around the search for people. Various people are looking for people to chase people. It feels like the writing is a bit rushed and there are many holes that are not filled in. Overall, it feels pretty good and suitable for everyone to read.

I think this book is very interesting. The male protagonist should be strong like this, instead of having to fight to the death all day long. Not to mention the slow upgrade, it's still a waste of time. It's not like some authors who write a book that starts a fight as soon as it comes, and then fights all day long. The fight lasts for several chapters and it's boring to read. All in all, this book is good. You will only know if it is good or not after reading it.