The Great World of Heaven-Slaying

Does the author know how high 3,000 feet is? Two hundred meters higher than Mount Everest. If you are fighting a monster that is 200 meters higher than Mount Everest, you are just a bacteria. The monster needs a microscope to fight you😓. It's really annoying, and the descriptions are often hundreds of feet long or even tens of thousands of feet long.

Overall, it's good. I can write it step by step. I can score 80 points.

It's pretty good-looking, better than the ones with mixed characters

It was very exciting at first! Later I felt that the writing was too hasty and the protagonist was too dazzling! It cannot express the feeling of wandering between life and death. Somewhat blunt! But the ending is still very happy.

It's not bad. I'll give it a score of seventy-five.

I don't like techniques that take up a lot of resources, so the male protagonist is the one who practices such techniques! Abandon books

Brother, go ahead and write about the city. You are not suitable for writing fantasy. Hours, minutes, seconds, centimeters and centimeters all appear. There is no intention of letting people read.

I just want to know why the protagonist, who is the strongest max-level student, fights those people with all his might. Do you feel comfortable writing this way? This way the protagonist isn't too useless

Very nice, really good!

It's good to watch, but the hero is a little crazy.