Long Son-In-Law

I wonder if the author will read it? I have the following suggestions 1. Try not to be single. Let the protagonist be with many girls who appeared in the past. Since the world has changed, don't always involve the previous protagonist. This is not conducive to new readers. 2. The protagonist lacks competition. I think the author should improve the IQ of the villain and add some conspiracy or planning trap types to increase the number of readers. 3. The protagonist still lacks some competition. I suggest adding a strong competitor. He also has a system to fight for. Whoever catches the heroine first in one world will win. Of course, the twists and turns in the middle are up to you, the author, to consider. 4. You can update this slowly or if you are busy in advance, just leave a request for leave. Try not to be too watery, because it will easily affect the viewing of the work. Don't pay too much attention to those readers. Don't influence those who are too holy. When the strength reaches a certain level, you will not feel that the weak are really equal to everyone. This world cannot be too holy. 5. The author needs to hold on, as long as you work hard, I am still waiting, and the comics are also there. I know that the author's words usually have an outline, and only some small details are modified in the middle, which will not affect most of the direction. Work hard and believe in yourself.

A very good book with a plot, unlike some novels that repeat plots. Moreover, this book contains love, strategy, and martial arts details, as well as some interesting stories and culture. In my third life, I felt the real society, and I still felt very uncomfortable. In short, this is a good book. I hope everyone will support the author and continue to work hard. I also hope everyone will not give up on their dreams.

The protagonist of the novel, Li Huguo, is a villain. The plot is based on each life as a node, similar to fast time travel. There are about 9 female protagonists, and the characters in this life may correspond to the characters in the previous life. Among Li Huguo's nine wives, only two people call Li Yuguo "bad guy", one is the cutest Yun Yuechen, and the other is the second cutest Xie Lingyun. Well done Yunxian! When he introduces his sister to his man, he would rather be angry and drama than her sister. However, Yun Yuechen's later performance was too good: she didn't want to practice hard, she just wanted to be a quiet little woman and Li Hugo's pistachio.

It's still good, but it's obviously written well before, so why do I have to go to another world? , The taste has changed, just like "The First Class Butler", the world view has changed, and it attracts fewer people, but the finished product is still good, but the extra is a bit mysterious😄

I only got into it after watching the anime, but the backend was boring. If a story is so bad, there's no one left, so can't you just write it randomly? After you time travel, you still tell others that you are a time traveler, whitewashing your blackness and whitewashing it, and then whitewashing your blackness again. This is no one else? There were five major martial sects in the first five major families, but then they disappeared. I lost interest after reading the first story, which means I lost interest after more than 400 chapters.

I'm really drunk. I'm obviously a system cultivator. It's too cowardly to have a country brawl with pig's feet in the future. I can't protect my own women. To be honest, everyone has their own fate. To be honest, it's ugly to say that they don't have enough strength to dominate the world. Moreover, this system is really useless except buying some garbage. Many of the previous pitfalls have been hastily solved (I can't stand it after seeing the summary of the 400 episodes).

I really wanted to watch it when I first saw it.

Why did the story change after 480? And the hero just accepted it. And I looked at the catalog, and I guess there will be another story after this story is finished. It leaves me in no mood to watch it

The plot in the first two lives was well written and very beautiful, but why did the author plagiarize the anime in the third life? But overall, the plot is very attractive with its ups and downs. The only drawback is that many of the characters are exactly the same as those in the anime, so I won't go into details.

I feel like the author has reversed the description of the villain and the real character. Isn't Ye Qiong the real protagonist? I always feel like he is the villain BOSS in the book.