Wan Gu Poison Lord

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Overall it's very good, otherwise it wouldn't be so popular. Those who directly say that the book is not good, please give me a reason. Don't judge by that sentence. The characters are quite colorful. In the boring trend after so many classic novels, this one is already good. At least it kept me from giving up reading. Many of the books I found before were really unreadable. This book actually puts a lot of effort into each noun. The unnecessary ones are passed over in one stroke. It would be better if the protagonist's methods can be more varied or have more new tricks.

If a protagonist relies on someone else just for a woman from the beginning, it would disgrace the protagonist and write nonsense.

There are too many typos, even the chapter titles have typos, and they are also too wordy.

Why is this the end?

The protagonist's father is going to kill him. Why should he take his father's surname instead of giving her mother's surname?

This is my second favorite novel of this type, but some words are repeated too much!

One suggestion I would like to make is whether the protagonist can accept a dead servant or the like, but it is best not to accept a disciple, as it will easily lead to collapse. All in all, it's very boring for the protagonist to run back and forth. He already has the base camp of Miaojiang. Why not hire a dead servant to help the protagonist deal with things and act as a spokesperson, because the hostess also has to practice cultivation and other things, which is a bit insufficient. So I wrote a dead servant who can act as a spokesperson on the surface, and can also help the protagonist set up formations, investigate, etc. (I mainly hope that the influence of the dead servant is: IQ is on par with the protagonist, low cultivation level but very good talent, and a taboo placed on the soul by the protagonist, which is absolutely heartfelt.)

The author turned me over! ! !

In one chapter, the male protagonist says that women have poor adaptability. You can change it to: You really have poor adaptability. This should make people think that you are saying that women have poor adaptability. . Not all women are like this. . Also, the male protagonist said that Li Lan has double standards, doesn't the male protagonist not have double standards? If he was tortured by that woman, would he let her go? If the male protagonist really has such a good heart, why does he want to take revenge on the Jie family? This makes me a bit uncomfortable as a woman. .