Peerless Emperor

The general rules of the novel ~ trash ~ adventure or rebirth (fusion of two souls) ~ counterattack ~ arrogant and arrogant, a lot of enemies, pig's feet like an unbeatable little strong~~~~~~~~. Plot: The villain is looking for trouble with pig's feet, villain: You dare to hurt me (you dare to kill me)... Do you know who I am and what sect (family) they will not let you go. Pig's feet; if they don't hurt you (or kill you), will they let me go? ~Then he was reasonable, talked a lot of nonsense, and then killed him, haha, it was so funny, just kill him, why did he talk so much nonsense? Do you want to make up the word count and submit the manuscript? ? Highlight your eloquence? Yes

1. The early stage is very good, and the rhythm is also well controlled. 2. Chaos mode begins in the mid-term. After the Great Heavenly Throne, there should be the Mortal Martial Realm, the Martial Lord Realm and then the Martial King Realm. As a result, Mortal Martial Arts and Martial Lord Realm disappear directly in the mid-term. 3. The ending is unfinished. In the early stage, the heroines Xia Lei, Ning'er and other heroines evaporated directly in the later stage without mentioning anything. Two chapters of Queen Wu's four realms were completed. 4 Generally speaking, I don't recommend it. It's too confusing from the middle to the late stages. The characters are messed up, the realm is messed up, and the strength is also messed up.

There is no sense of space, more than a hundred acres of holy land? ? ? With so many people per acre, it's hard to spread our muscles!

There must be dozens of typos in this chapter.

The writing seems to be a bit inconsistent.

The protagonist does not match

The jump is too serious

How did the peerless Emperor of Heaven overcome the tribulation and become the King of Martial Arts in this book? Didn't he overcome the tribulation and become a strong man in the realm of the Emperor of Heaven? What is this written by the author?

It's pretty good. I just want to read something that's neither too long nor too short. The author is also working hard. I hope there will be more works in the future.

There are too many typos and some sentences are not fluent, which shows that the author has limited literary talent and did not check it. There are also obvious loopholes or illogicalities in the plot. For example, I haven't talked about his parents after reading more than ten chapters.