Martial Arts Buddha

I feel like it's not over yet. Why is there no more?

Yes, it gave me an endless aftertaste, but the ending left me unsatisfied, as if I hadn't finished writing. Maybe it's because I've entered the world you wrote, and now I suddenly return to reality, which I can't accept. I just have an idea now, to become a friend of the author, have a good chat, and learn!

Very good

What's not good is that the sect took in the male protagonist when he was in the most difficult and helpless situation, but then betrayed the apprenticeship for a woman. It's better not to write about how righteous and great the male protagonist is, because the male protagonist doesn't deserve it!

What about the ending?

All five aggregates are empty

I think it's average. The ending is too sloppy. It feels like there is no ending. There's no writing on whether the old dragon is saved or not. I can't tell whether the plot is modern or ancient. There are too many modern sentences.

Sure enough, I still fell into the cliché and grew my hair, alas...

It's half-written and whetting people's appetites, so why not write a sequel?

I feel that the author's level is only about level 1 or 2 of martial arts.