The Primordial Era's Divine Refining System

Brother, this kid was just born, and he absorbed a tear, a luminous pearl, and some spiritual energy, and he thinks he can defeat the Bull Demon King? Have you never read Journey to the West? Don't you know the Bull Demon King is a demon king from the lower realms?! A demon king!! Defeated by a newborn child. You might as well write a story about someone who transmigrates to the primordial chaos and becomes invincible! (̿▀̿ ̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)̄

It's giving me a headache! The writing style and word choice are just awful!

That's interesting. They always say that line, "You're kidding me."

Oh my god, I was completely dumbfounded after watching half of it.

This is just random writing, a complete mess. I have no idea what it's trying to say. Is this the kind of writing you're going to do?

Every time I think I've found a good book, I excitedly open the book review, only to leave feeling utterly disappointed.

Shouldn't the titles after "Daluo" be Quasi-Saint, Heavenly Dao Saint, and Great Dao Saint (Hun Yuan Daluo Golden Immortal)? And "Xiang Dao Zun," "Supreme," and "Great Dao Zun"? Can you please stop changing these titles? I gave up after reading a few pages... It left Mencius confused, Zhuangzi bewildered, Confucius baffled, and Laozi kicked it away without a word 🌚.

This is so confusing! Ao Bing died when he was conferred the title of god, so is Journey to the West still around?

The writing style is frivolous, the language is disjointed, the same sentences are repeated many times, and the content is dull and uninteresting.

Each immortal only has a strength of a few hundred pounds, so wouldn't that ton be able to destroy the world with a single punch? 😂😂😂