Riding into Battle in Great Ming

Advantages: 1. The author has indeed done research on ancient military, geography, and humanities. The historical background is really good and there are almost no flaws. 2. The writing style is quite good, the plot is tight and tight, and the understanding and description of the war should be at the T1 level among current online articles. 3. Overall, it is mainly enjoyable. Among them, the surprise attack to kill Huang Taiji, the sea city defense battle and other battles make people excited. 4. The author has a good understanding of the world and has a good control over the character's personality. He does not overwhelm his intelligence or cheat. He is arrogant when he should be arrogant and calm when he should be calm, making people feel comfortable. Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist is a big stallion, and he collects a harem every day. I am crazy about it. Why is it so difficult to limit the harem to less than five people in the current time-travel novel? 2. The author has a strong national sentiment, and the article heavily criticizes the evil deeds committed by the Manchus during their invasion. Not that this is wrong, but in the context of the current national unity, it makes me a little worried: This author is really big-hearted, isn't he afraid of 404? Manchu compatriots should avoid lightning appropriately. 3. The ending is extremely clumsy, with no explanation of the fate of the characters, and the shock brought by the news of the annihilation of the Qing Dynasty and the pacification of the Republic of China was not shown at all. I didn't feel comfortable watching it at all. The author actually ended what could have been 50-100 chapters in one chapter, and I was speechless.

The writing is good, but the writing on women is a bit overdone. You can attack the Manchu Queen Mother. After all, the relationship is hostile and Mongolian women do not value chastity. It would not be a wise choice to attack the empress, concubine and matchmaker of the Ming Dynasty. Confucianism during the Ming Dynasty was serious, and chastity was always valued above life. Those women would rather die than let you destroy their chastity. So the writing in this aspect failed very much.

Now that I have read almost 300 chapters, I feel very good overall. There are very few authors with such writing style and conception in late Ming Dynasty novels. The only drawback is that you are a bit of a stud, especially if you have thoughts about red ladies? Li Yan has surrendered to the protagonist, but he still has thoughts about the Red Lady? Forget it if you have thoughts about other women, but for your wife who has surrendered to one of his subordinates? I feel like this is the only criticism of the book.

There are too many emotional scenes, almost as soon as I see a woman, I just stop it. I can't bear it and I feel that the author is mentally frustrated. I can't stand it anymore as I watch it. The plot is originally very good. I beg the author to change it. I really suspect that the author is writing a hydrology.

The author, I would like to give you a suggestion. You have made a mistake in the Kong family hierarchy. The correct hierarchy is: hope Yan Gong Yan Cheng, Hong (Hong) Wen Zhen Shang Yin (Yan). Xingyu passed on to Guang, Zhaoxian was celebrated and prosperous. Let Dewei bless you, and Qin Shao's thoughts be prominent. The construction of roads ensures stability, the repairs lead to Yi Chang, the prosperity of culture and prosperity, and the prosperity of Yongxi. Among them, the 65th generation originally had the character "Yin". Kong Yinzhi, the Holy Duke of Yan, changed the character "Yin" to the character "Yan" to avoid the taboo of the emperor's temple. How can we talk about uncles and nephews when the word Yan is 65 generations and the word Wei is 78 generations?

It was a good book, but there were too many women describing Xu Changqing, and it seemed like the number of words was crammed into the book, which was also the biggest flaw.

If you don't know how to write, then don't write. The more you write, the worse it gets. This is the bullshit you wrote with a twisted mentality.

The person who wrote the novel has at least no military knowledge about ancient wars. First, the Ming army was not as unbearable as the novel said even in the late Ming Dynasty. Second, the role of cannons in ancient wars in the late Ming Dynasty was relatively mature. Whether it was defending the city or naval warfare, there were many cannons, rockets, blunderbuss, and various instruments for attacking and defending cities, which were more professional. Most of the military defeats in the late Ming Dynasty were not caused by the quality of the soldiers, but by leadership, command and supply problems. The term refers to the corrupt government of the Ming Dynasty, and most of the officials who were greedy and fearful of death played a decisive role.

I like this book very much. The author has good literary talent and the writing is quite realistic. However, the protagonist is a bit perverted and almost rejects women when he sees them. This seems uncomfortable. I think other things are fine and understandable. As a fan, I can see that the author has read a lot of books and has many ideas. I hope the author will not be swayed by comments and just feel free to write. I support it very much.

Chapter 436: The emperor is forcing the emperor to go to the palace. The protagonist is still too cowardly. If it were me, I would explain to my subordinates in advance: If I don't come out after an hour, I will send troops to the capital. After entering the palace, I will give the emperor a big cake. I am the only one who can resist Li Zicheng now, and I already have a way. I hope the emperor will think twice before he acts, otherwise, it will be a dead end for everyone.