Unrivaled Across the Ages

It looks good, I like it, and I know that the author updates it very quickly. The author works very hard. But why does it feel a bit watery? The progress of the story is a bit slow. There are too many exclamations. I almost watched it while skipping.

It's so verbose and annoying.

Can you update more? It's not enough.

Too much talking

There is really too much nonsense. I read it for a long time and had no idea what it was about.

The author is an oblivious maniac. What's the analogy? But, moreover, often he writes three or four chapters of nonsense before a single move is made. Two-thirds of the whole article is nonsense. I want to vomit! How can such a work be published?

Too little harm, not enough to see

I'm really verbose, just for the sake of word size.

It can't be said that there is too much nonsense. The author is trying to make the plot interesting. Many of the jokes in it must have put some thought into it, but some of them are putting the cart before the horse, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. The author can actually grasp this degree, that is, it can be interesting and not boring. After all, there are still many such works. It can only be said that it is a pity, and it seems to be forcibly finished in the end. That is a pity plus a pity. All this work can only be average.

The storyline is okay, but there are too many exclamatory sentences, which feels like it's trying to fill the word count. Hopefully there will be less nonsense.