
The Sword Breaks the Immortal Shock
剑破仙惊
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3.3M Words
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- Qimao
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1.3kChapters
2.3MPopularity
935Readers
19kMust-read votes
9.1Score
17.4kRatings
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The writing is very good, and the male protagonist is very dedicated. There is only enough time to love one person in a lifetime! Even though the heroine died in the end, the hero insisted not to marry. It's a shame that the two extremes finally came together. It's a pity that Jing Hua Jiang Li, Zhong Wangxue, and Li have finished reading them all. I feel that the author wrote them very seriously.
How should I put it? This is the third book that I have endured to finish. One is the Sword Master of Another World, the other is Doppoo, and then this is Jian Po Xian Jing. Overall, it is still a bit sad. The ending does not feel particularly perfect, but it is remarkable. In the end, I couldn't tell whether Ye Xuan loved Liu Baisu or Lin Zhimeng.
In other words, this book is one of the best books I have ever read. The suspense at the end is very meaningful. Along the way, the character Ye Xuan was written very realistically. It is impossible for every protagonist to be perfect. A novel that destroys an interface in one breath and pinches people like ants with one hand would seem the most boring. This plot is very interesting. There are just a few points I don't understand. The appearance of Xiaoyao was too simple, and the exit of several supporting female characters was a bit sudden. This is not a joke, it is just a simple question from a reader. Personally. I still like this book very much. Good review!
Haha, three thousand drowned, take a scoop to drink? You are overthinking it. Since it is a fantasy novel, don't write it from a secular perspective. It is normal for the male protagonist to have three wives and four concubines. It is reasonable and reasonable to write about three wives. As long as it is not more than seven or eight and she is dedicated, I am convinced! Brother, fantasy and fantasy are about transcending the secular world. Also, if you can't let go, why should you be sentimental? It's not a martial arts novel! Martial arts novels have one man and one wife, so that's reasonable. When I read chapter 1,000, I skipped directly to the end. I'm not telling you, I was so disappointed! Author, don't think that monogamy is the only way to be dedicated. A woman who does so much for the protagonist gets nothing in the end. It really shouldn't happen! ! ! ! Xiao Yan also has two wives in Dou Po Cang Qiong. I feel sorry for Yun Yun, but he still doesn't have loyal fans? Women should not write too much. If you write too much, it will not be easy to finish, otherwise it will be hastily passed. For example, he is not from the same world as the male protagonist, and he knows that he is not worthy of him. Otherwise, you must write well. The male protagonist also likes a woman who is willing to give everything for the male protagonist, and the male protagonist has to cherish her! If it's full of love and jokes, then it's not a fantasy novel! ! !
I think the later part is not unfinished and is better than the previous one. I'm still not satisfied after reading it. I'm afraid I'll never see such a wonderful book again. It's so good, so perfect. It's so familiar, so well-written, very good, it makes people feel so good. Why does the male protagonist have to be involved with so many women? The road of martial arts should be calm. Let's confess first. He must offend many people when he walks in this world! Then these people will use these women as bargaining chips to threaten him. Do you think it's right? How is he? Don't let down any woman. He feels guilty and can't go far in this martial arts. All he needs is a heroine! Don't involve too much! A truly upright person doesn't have so many emotional involvements! But there are no ties, no worries, just the company of a woman, that's all!
Overall, the story is complete, with climaxes one after another, and the male protagonist's personality is obvious. The first and middle stages are pretty good, although sometimes it feels wordy and boring. In comparison, the plot in the later chapters is slightly weaker, and some endings are unexpected. The most unfortunate thing is that the final finale is arranged a thousand years later, and the turning moment is superfluous.
In fact, what touched me the most about this book was the emotional aspect. When I read this book, I was with a girl I had liked for two years, but I didn't feel that she liked me. She later told me that she didn't have feelings for me, and we broke up. I actually couldn't figure out why she wanted to be with me even though she didn't have feelings for me. Together, after reading it, I realized that maybe she also wanted to have feelings for me, and I didn't force her. I had been waiting for a long time. Some people may say that only two years can be so long, but is anyone really willing to wait? I don't want to wait any longer. The more I wait, the more disappointed I will be, so I want to start a new life without her...
A mutant horse who cares a lot, but is too cruel if he doesn't care, my taste is hard to satisfy 😂😂
After reading the entire novel, I almost cried in some parts, but the biggest regret is that Liu Baisu died in the end. Cultivation to immortality is a step against heaven. It would be a bit decadent if you don't try to break through to a higher level just because you think Liu Baisu can't be saved. In fact, you can still continue writing, at least you can write a few hundred more. Work hard next time
I couldn't write this book after suffering a cerebral hemorrhage for ten years. I can't do anything without a woman. Don't I have a brother?