Refining the Mountains and Rivers

It's so beautiful. The ancient Xiu Xian type mobile live streaming WeChat group has everything. It's beautiful.

The meeting with the senior sister, that chapter was really a failure, just to show off? It would be better to write directly to the world of gods and demons. The relationship between the protagonist and his senior sister, haha, is it a spare tire? I don't see any emotion at all, it's no different from green tea. The description of swallowing his senior sister's demonic body is really disgusting🤢🤢🤢🤢 Then I started to let myself go and do all kinds of things, 1. Join the army: The overall situation feels like walking instead of flying to the sky. Besides, you join the army with an article on cultivating immortals? It's better to write about the Frontline Alliance, which is really going here and there. 2. Refining magic pills to combat counterfeiting: I don't have a breakdown, but there are still 10,000 to 20,000 words, all of which are water. You can prove the authenticity by swallowing them in the end. 3. Intrusion of mobile phones: Isn't it funny? It might as well be a communication jade card, and it can also be written into APP and satellites? 4. Number of words about water: After meeting my senior sister, I was filled with words about water. Do you think this is interesting? A very novel way of writing? ? 5. Danlu who takes the elixir: What is written? What is written? What is written in the description of the Light Alchemy Furnace session? Then there is the process of refining the elixir. The whole scene is just like a primary school student bragging about what he is doing? Anyway, I can't stand it

The first few chapters are pretty good, but the further you go, the more pitfalls you get. The main character is poorly written, and skipping to the ending doesn't fill up those pitfalls. It's really boring.

Don't fall into the trap, the protagonist is sick and looking for death, a person who forgets to die after seeing sex, and is mentally disabled.

Fighter among hot chickens

Comment details This is not cultivating immortals. Regardless of the banner of Nascent Soul Golden Pill, in fact, this is a fantasy novel and has nothing to do with cultivating immortals. Have you ever seen anyone in the Golden Core Foundation Establishment Stage still fighting with fists? There are no magic weapons or spells, so fighting relies on fists and body. You said he was practicing physical training, but it's impossible for everyone to be practicing physical training, right? But he always hits people with his fists. And here, the golden finger of the protagonist is Han Li's little green bottle. It's not too much to say that he is a fantasy pirated mortal wearing the skin of a cultivator, right?

The more I listen to it, the more rubbish it becomes

Why do you still have a mobile phone and an APP? It was fine in the front, but this happened later and I felt like throwing up when I saw it.

The front is okay, but what is written on the back?

The plot is scattered and absurd, and the logic is not rigorous enough.