Reborn, I Refuse to Be a Love-Struck Fool. The Capital’s Princeling Begs Me to Take Him Back

The following is what I want to comment on after watching it for two hours in August If you don't watch it, you will feel uncomfortable for a while, but if you watch it, you will feel uncomfortable for a lifetime. The male protagonist was 19 years old and the female protagonist was 21 years old. After dating for a year, it turned out that the heroine recognized the wrong person and slept with the scumbag on the first night My relationship with the male protagonist for so long has been fruitless, and I got together on the first night with the scumbag who admitted his mistake. There are even details: Are you trying to ruin the heroine or not? So disgusting You want to say that the heroine and the scumbag have been together offline for a while, and they got together naturally, which is okay. What you wrote makes me feel that the male and female protagonists are not important, they are just used as wedding clothes for the scumbag. The heroine gave everything to the scumbag and even supported him with all her heart and soul I was hurt. I have to do it again and be a bad woman who only collects money. If you want to write about bad women, just write directly The vain and self-interested heroine lives a harmonious life with the male protagonist. If you don't write, you won't feel it. You must write that you were very kind in your previous life, that you loved your boyfriend with all your heart, but that you loved him but were let down. She was heartbroken by a scumbag. After her rebirth, she only cared about money and not her heart. She turned into a black man in a legitimate way, which happened to flow between two men (after her rebirth, she became physically intimate with the scumbag). Later, it was discovered that the male protagonist was the online dating partner, and the chaos was brought to order. The male protagonist in the previous life clearly knew that his girlfriend had the wrong person, and he might even know that the female protagonist was having a hard time, so why didn't he come to find her? How lovingly do you write this? Just to make the heroine completely black I don't think it's what the heroine wants, it's what the author likes. The heroine's miserable life in her previous life is just to advance the plot. She suffered so much and decided to seal her heart with concrete after being let down. She is vain and self-interested and beautiful all just to cater to your hobbies. It makes me very uncomfortable to see According to this plot, I guess the heroine will have nothing to do with the scumbag until the finale. The male protagonist observes why the female protagonist wants to imitate others and become the younger brother of a scumbag? The scumbag gave the heroine a bracelet for 99 yuan. The heroine kept it as a treasure for two years. After breaking up, she lost it and the hero picked it up again. Should I say you are affectionate? Anyway, it's a bit weird because it was given by a scumbag. The male protagonist has a younger sister who is very close to him and has a good relationship with her. The article says that she has been a doting sister since childhood. And knowing that his sister likes him, he indulges her liking and takes advantage of her. I don't even want to let the heroine be a target to block the blind date girls, and let my sister block the love. Everyone is evil, right? 🦩She is single anyway, and she doesn't want to be a chaste and martyr girl. Gu Yichen is still pretty clean at the moment. If Qin Yitong doesn't call Gu Yichen away, then don't blame her for eating up the scumbag and wipe him clean. 666 Can all the scumbags who don't want it be eaten? In the front, the scumbag and the heroine are hugging and kissing. The hero is watching from the car outside, feeling sad. I endured it The scumbag and the heroine kiss on the forehead, hug and kiss. There are also kisses on the neck, and they are even so intimate that they take off their clothes and kiss the skin. Later, the male protagonist broke out of the door, got close to the male protagonist, and was pulled into the arms of the scumbag again the next day. I can't bear it anymore I just can't stand being intimate with two people at the same time, or even being intimate with one of them while the other one watches The process with the scumbag is very detailed. Is this your self-interest? Shouldn't it be to ensure that you are not harmed and get more? Your self-interest is to dedicate yourself. If you really get to that point, you can marry a scumbag, and you can accept do. If you want to write about multiple male protagonists, just write it generously in the introduction. I liked watching harems a few years ago, but now I don't like watching them, because after watching pornographic films, I feel dirty when I watch them with multiple people. Now when I look at the fish pond, I see the names of the big guys, and I turn around and leave. But I was still shocked This is the wife-chasing crematorium in the introduction. I thought it was condescending to the male protagonist. The scumbag cried bitterly and regretted it. No intimacy Your crematorium is that after being reborn, the scumbag can still go to the stage of kissing the heroine. I'm a bit incapable of accepting it. I can accept that the heroine and the scumbag are together, but you don't want to write down the process and don't go into details. At least don't write about two men one behind the other. Mistakes in the article: Bai Lianhua's name for the scumbag, "Brother Yichen," has been labeled as Yichen dog. There is even a dialogue between the heroine at the back: I said you were barking, what was wrong in the front? Even Bai Lianhua said, you won't fall in love with this wanderer, right? In a short period of time, the content of brother and dog has appeared frequently. At this time, you haven't realized that you beat brother into a dog? I can understand if the person's name is misspelled. I can understand if some words in a sentence are misspelled. Just understand it. You took Bai Lianhua's name for the scumbag, even the gesture that showed admiration, adoration, clinging to someone, and intimacy, but it was like calling a dog. It's seriously OOC, right? Imagine a picture Bai Lianhua: Yichengou, you are really kind to me. Stop pestering Yichengou, he promised to marry me If you say this is a joke, it seems like she hates this scumbag. 9.16 The back part is quite interesting, especially the part where the heroine and the hero are flirting with each other. Everyone else is in the style of a wealthy family. The relationship between the two of them is very sweet and special, and it's like ambiguous people getting along. The heroine calls the hero brother, with a big sister teasing him, and the hero calls the heroine sister It's the male protagonist. In addition to using his real name, he is always called Huo Xiaodi, as if he is using it as his first name. It's so strange. I don't want to give bad reviews now. The male protagonist and the female protagonist all rely on a routine to get together. They use the female protagonist's ID card to get married and secretly hold the ID card themselves. Inquiring about her well-being when she was "pregnant" The female protagonist is generous, lively, gentle, and cute. She is a bit burdened by the male protagonist's love for her, so she says I am a bad woman, so don't love me. Try your best to discredit yourself She said that the male protagonist can not only beautify the face, but also take good care of the female protagonist and help her plan. She went to bed and bought breakfast the next day. The key is not to take responsibility yet But then the male and female protagonists hugged each other with a computer between them The male protagonist said, this is good The heroine realized that something was wrong. A normal person would probably want to go further when facing a beautiful woman, or to face someone he likes. I don't want to. Either I'm shy and young, or I just don't like it and I'm just pretending. I pretended to like her before just to get revenge on her The heroine immediately became alert That's probably what I said, because the article didn't make it clear and I was confused. ①The male protagonist is very smart, but because his sister likes the male protagonist, she is jealous of the female protagonist and marries the old man instead. The male protagonist can't even see through such a vicious person. He has been doting on him since he was a child. Read the reply if you haven't finished writing↓