The City's Wild Young Master

The plot is too slow. Ye Fan enters the secret realm every day and gets opportunities every day, either from an immortal or a powerful person. As a result, after receiving the inheritance, he is either not upgraded or upgraded to a level. How much energy does he need? If so, will Ye Fan eat up the entire world of cultivation when he reaches God King? If every genius was like Ye Fan, wouldn't they go crazy? Who would still cultivate? There is also a very good writing on the earth, with the little Suzaku, now where is the Suzaku? Stewed by Mark? I remember there was another dragon egg, but it's gone now. Was it also stewed by Mark? According to the convention of writing this kind of novel, the protagonist must reach the last realm before he can leave the world of cultivation. But Ye Fanxiu is so slow. By the time he reaches the God King, your father and wife on the earth will be gone, and your grandson's grandson will also be underground, right? I hope the author can write the plot faster and not be so ink. Can he consider the feelings of the people on the earth? Can he give Ye Fan a great opportunity to break through to the ninth level of transcending tribulation, and then watch Mr. Jinniu's inner elixir break through to the Immortal Lord? Isn't this too slow? It's getting better soon, and I will write about Golden Lotus next, and then break through the Immortal Emperor, ascend to the God Realm, cultivate to the God King in the God Realm to dominate the God Realm, and then take the wife of the Cultivation Realm to the Earth, play on the Earth for a few days and then return to the God Realm. What a good plot, the author hopes to refer to it. Thank you

In fact, I just want to know where the God of War's clone on earth is. Can't it grow with the growth of the protagonist? Ji Yuanhao can be understood as the boss at the end. But there are still a few holes dug but not filled, such as Dragon Egg, Fire God Zhurong, Chi You's eight generals, etc. Later on, when the protagonist encounters difficulties and his inner activities are too careless, he simply says: Damn it. Then I found the solution, a bit suddenly, but everything else was pretty good. This urban novel about cultivating immortals can transition from the city to cultivating immortals, and it has the flavor of cultivating immortals. The pace is not fast or slow, which is pretty good. The author should also have experience in writing or reading novels about cultivating immortals. It's not bad.

I want to give a bad review, but the book is well written; I want to give a good review, but I have some small opinions about the book, so I'll give it a neutral review. Let me clarify my opinions for you. You started to forget some people after writing. For example, Ye Fan, his wife Nangong Xian, Dongfang Mingyue, Tang Xiao, etc., And his father have written more than a thousand chapters since leaving the earth until now, and none of them have written about the situation on the earth. And you didn't write about the matter of collecting all the Immortal Emperor's weapons. Another example is his arch-enemy Ji Yuanhao. When you wrote "Leaving Earth", Ji Yuanhao also left the Earth. You never mentioned it. The most important thing is "slowing the pace". The so-called "slowing the pace" is to hit someone, and when he is about to die, he takes out some magic weapon and hits him again... But this "slowing the pace" is still a bit unacceptable to me.

Ah, Niubi. He has defeated all kinds of supernatural tribulations and tribulations that can only be caused by immortals. And he can't defeat several disciples of sects. What are you setting up? You said that his strength is better than that of the top true immortals. Overcoming tribulations Ninth level. And he is also outstanding among the top ones. As a result, the eighth level of transcending tribulation is very difficult to fight. Sometimes you have to use various magical weapons. What the hell is this? The words in the dialogue: Ah. Oh. Yes. Ha. What is this? It looks like xxs's composition to me. The more I read, the more I feel my IQ has been rubbed. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. Those who say they don't want to read it, don't read it. I trouble you to read it later. You can speak after reading it. Are you convinced?

This novel is my favorite. It will take more than 4,000 chapters to finish the book. A lot of foreshadowing has not been written. The Protoss is a big foreshadowing. I think it will take at least 2,900 more chapters to save Chu Mengyao. After the rescue, I don't know how the Protoss will gradually appear. Ye Fan will definitely become the late emperor and will definitely fight with the gods. Dominate the universe

Chu Mengyao is obviously Ye Fan's first love, why haven't they had a relationship yet? ? ? Why don't all first loves have some relationship? ? ? Why is this? Author, can you talk to me? ? ψ(`∇´)ψ

It's too boring. Once you fight a battle, you need to update it for at least one day. Once you enter a secret realm, you need to update it for at least a month. Can you make some progress? How many years will it take you to update this book?

Second, I have been following updates from last year to this year.

Starting from the invasion of demons in more than 2,000 chapters, the style is completely different from the previous one, and now it is completely wrong.

A true man who was originally looked up to by thousands of people was completely destroyed in this chapter! What kind of unyielding and fearless ambition, what kind of barely upright image, what kind of sense of responsibility as a man, no longer exist when he throws down his weapons and is willing to die under the sword of his wife in name only. What is left is just self-destruction and evasion of irresponsibility. Because: he has sorry for too many people, not to mention Er Chang, Ruan Hongluo, Xiao Yunrong, Tang Tiantian, Nangong Xianer, Dongfang Mingyue, Qi Linglong. He has slept with all these women, and they are all real couples. Some of them have saved him with their own lives, and even Linglong is still on the verge of death. The most important thing is that he feels sorry for Wei Qianshan. Without the old man, he has nothing, and he would not be where he is now. He would have died long ago, let alone fall in love with Chu Mengyao. If he were a real man, he should leave decisively when Chu Mengyao's memory was controlled. When he was strong enough to kill the Immortal Lord instantly, he would go to Shuiyue Palace, kill the culprit Bingyu Immortal Lord and the two women who had kidnapped Mengyao, and then restore Mengyao's memory. This is called being unyielding and fearless, and being determined. It is in line with Ye Fan's consistent personality. You are too weak to write the book, and it also reveals that you are a person with a weak character. Whether it is for plot needs or written based on feelings in life, I would like to advise you to cherish the people in front of you and cherish everything you have. If what I said is inappropriate, please don't blame me.