Five Elements Waste Spiritual Roots? I Can Exchange One Spiritual Stone for One Year of Cultivation.

If you pass by, don't miss it. Those who have tickets will support the ticket show, and those who don't have tickets will support the show alone. Hello everyone, I am the author of this book. Readers, if you have any comments or suggestions, you can write them here. The author can't speak, so I wish you all get rich, get rich, get rich!

There is nothing wrong with the plot so far. It is very interesting and humorous. There are occasional typos. I suggest you write more about the protagonist's daily life and the battle process in more detail. The author's emotional portrayal is still relatively delicate and worthy of praise. If you accumulate vocabulary and writing experience, I believe you can catch up with top writers such as Fenghuo Opera Princes.

Beautiful, never tire of it. Although the update is a bit slow, the author's writing is very good and the writing is not bad. If there are typos, they will be corrected immediately.

I've read more than 100 chapters, and I think it's pretty good, but there are indeed some minor flaws in some places. For example, there was a sudden change of scene. One moment, we were preparing to fight, and the next moment, we suddenly started chatting. I read the context four or five times before I understood what was going on. I also felt that some sentences were written to make up the number of words. I saw that some words could be more fluent, fit the scene, and make sense by changing the words. One more thing! , I have been a villain from the beginning until now and I can still survive. The protagonist can be easily solved several times, but he just drags it and then survives quickly. It's really weird. Finally, I suggest that if you want to play a female protagonist, you should first lay the foundation for the relationship. If you don't do it, try not to push the relationship development line, otherwise it will end up being as weird as the Caixin Eunuch. It's better to have small flaws and so on, which are currently within the acceptable range. In the future, the quality can be maintained and the defects can be remedied, and the bottom line can be guaranteed to have a top-notch appearance.

I am confused as I write. Do you think the character setting of that Demon King is reasonable? Is the big man really willing to spend all his time cultivating himself? What is the difference between calling grandson daddy and grandpa? It poisoned me to death, give up. But after all, it is a new work, so I can barely support it. Books are for others to read, not for your own enjoyment.

This is the first time I've been able to read a book for so long📖It's just that the update is too slow and it's hard to say it's all trolls

The plot is extremely exaggerated and mainly funny

The plot is super interesting, and the connection is also very clever. The protagonist is not a love brain, so he knows how to improve his strength first, and it can be seen that he is not an AI. The only drawback is that it does not update quickly. I finished reading it in less than a day.

Lao Deng, you'd better update quickly! Otherwise, don't ask for a ticket!

Judging from all the chapters so far, I feel like I have picked gold out of shit. The plot is compact and coherent. The protagonist is systematic but not brainless, and has the desire to read on. Although these points seem very common, in the current novel environment, being able to achieve these points has set aside a large part of the novel. I hope the author can continue to maintain this in future chapters.