The First Marquis of Great Xuan

All kinds of bulls, horses and snake gods dared to write novels. At the beginning, they were okay, being tolerant and decisive in killing, but gradually they turned into tortoise shells. They were tolerant enough, but they dared to offend anyone if they were not high-level. What is written on the panel? The realm is very chaotic.

I have endured reading 600 chapters, but I really can't bear it anymore. It was okay at the beginning, but the more I write, the worse it gets. The true essence, physical cultivation, and soul can obviously be upgraded to invincible outside the realm first, and then the others. I have to waste points to improve this and that to increase the word count, and it is getting more and more holy. I like to be a dog, and I can't stand it anymore.

The funniest sentence in this book is that the sword technique is single, and it is supplemented by a sword technique. You have a sword with one hand and a sword with the other?

Everyone walked together. The front man had been fighting in the cave for a long time, and the protagonist behind him was still busy looking for a way for a long time? What kind of logic is this! When fighting, running away, and escaping for one's life, you and I are still there! Why don't you look at the scene? Bad review! I

Everything was fine in the early stage, but what happened when King Su rebelled?

The first 200 chapters were fine and readable, but the later chapters became uncomfortable to watch. The settings were contradictory. It was clear that the points required to reach the realm of elixirs after taking the elixir were reduced to 200,000. However, after taking the elixir again, it was calculated from 300,000. The previous chapters were not in vain. The most basic settings of the inconsistencies could be wrong. This was because I didn't write it seriously. People who read the comment section said that it became more and more poisonous in the later chapters, and I simply lost the desire to read it.

The subject matter is not bad, but the main character has too many restrictions. He is called a dog and has to be a slave. He gives answers with a playful smile, without any spirit or attitude of a warrior. He bends too much.

After reading Chapter 14, when the protagonist saves the woman, he immediately has a black question mark on his face? Is there any plot foreshadowing in the past? Is there a relationship between the protagonist and this woman? Not a word was mentioned, but now she suddenly goes up to save others regardless of her own safety. Her mother was hacked, and the protagonist watched helplessly, so she went up to save others? What does this person have to do with you? Licking the dog!

What are you writing about? It's so fast that you only run 800 miles a day? How far is such a big world? ? ? Others can travel tens of thousands of miles in a blink of an eye. How many miles have you been able to escape during these fights with villains? ? ?

The more I write, the worse I get