Sword Emperor

The novel does have a bit of an ancient Chinese style and undeniably some depth, but it doesn't fit the characteristics of today's fast-paced, action-packed novels. Compared to some other books, it does have many tedious parts. However, the depiction of battles and techniques is quite good. For example, the fight with the reincarnation of a certain time emperor lasted for several chapters.

The protagonist seems to be a clueless idiot and a Muggle, constantly bewildered and spacing out during battles. This is supposed to be a book, with one battle spanning several chapters. It started off somewhat interesting, but it gets increasingly verbose and nonsensical. It sounds like the protagonist has some kind of incredible treasure, but he's always impotent in fights.

I feel your portrayal of Sun Bing's relationships, particularly those with his two wives, is poorly done. He arrived at the 36th layer of illusion and hadn't seen his wives for three years, even after surviving a calamity. There wasn't even a brief embrace; they simply disappeared without a trace, leaving with Daozi and the others.

It's still good, but I feel there are a few things I don't like. First, it lacks mystery. From what I've seen so far, the plot seems to revolve around these points: the formal establishment of the human race, Sun Bing becoming emperor, defeating the hundred races, and then finding a way to escape the Great Cataclysm (I forget if that's the exact title). It feels a bit uninteresting.

It's good, but there are too many filler words. Avoid using phrases like "can't help it" too often. Also, is Zhou Ling still a character?

There's too much rambling. It feels like the author is just padding the word count. Many simple things are repeated over and over. Every breakthrough requires recounting the protagonist's life story, and every major move requires explaining his origins. Anyone who's read this far knows these things. So, the further this novel goes, the less I want to read it. I'm about to give up! Author, just keep going! Keep copying and pasting; you'll only ruin this novel.

If you want to see romance, go read urban fantasy novels or other novels. It's so hard to find a novel without so much romance, and you're still browsing here all over the place.

If you're unsure what to read, I highly recommend this book. It's the best book I've ever read. The author's writing is exquisite. The entire book boasts grand scenes, a complete plot, and seamless flow. It's suitable for newcomers, as the author incorporates the vast Nine Provinces continent, Yin and Yang, the Eight Trigrams, and the Myriad Realms Sea.

Author, please keep writing. Ignore the trolls; as long as you write, we'll keep reading.

The first chapter is flawed; the boy is wielding a three-inch-long wooden sword. Is three inches enough for him to wield?