Lingtian Sword Master

I always feel that the male protagonist is quite handsome and has women around him everywhere. In addition, he has problems with his logical thinking. He doesn't understand the concept of leapfrog fighting. There are also geniuses in the same level. For example, the male protagonist is an immortal king fighting an immortal king. The higher the male protagonist goes, he will kill the immortal king. But you, the immortal king, are also the most beautiful among the immortal kings. He can also leapfrog to become a higher immortal king than him. Do you see any problem? In addition, you are too pretentious, and you are always trying to find a way to liven it up. Although the passion is there, you feel a little unhappy afterwards.

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I really can't watch it anymore after seeing the division of realms. Comments will be reserved for the plot. Separation and union realm? I would like to ask if there is a ignition stage, a starting stage and a blocking stage behind the clutch? Driving. 😢

Okay, okay, I personally recommend writing less about leapfrogging battles. Although the protagonist has an aura, the most indispensable thing in the world is genius, right?

Just one question, how many women does the male protagonist have?

Chaos, chaos, chaos, pulling and pulling, talking nonsense. This book can be used as a fighter among the garbage.

The handling of the relationship is too outrageous. At first, Liu Yiyi was so moved when she left. Later, when he became the consort, he said that he didn't like her. If he didn't like her, he let her go and asked her to marry someone else. What the hell... And what the hell is that princess? She was already a princess, and she could still be married to her. It's simply too outrageous.

The story is vulgar and inconsistent, there is so much nonsense, one action is written in one picture, and the woman posts it when she sees the protagonist. What kind of routine is this? There are so many typos in the basic names that I can write them wrong, and I am impressed by the names of the characters in it. What the hell are the names of Hu Weiyong, Cao Ang, Yuan Tiangang, Li Chunfeng, and the royal family of the Southern Tang Dynasty? Why don't you write about Zhang Wuji and Linghu Chong Qiao Feng? I also want to see a hodgepodge of historical figures and characters from Jin Yong's novels. The protagonist writes a poem and has a vision of heaven and earth, plays the piano and has a vision of heaven and earth, writes a word and has a vision of heaven and earth. You want to move the heavens and the earth. Cultivation also makes sunglasses, cigarettes, and a band. Why don't you open a Haidilao McDonald's, Mr. Li? This is the most unprofessional warrior. It would be a blessing to think that someone as crazy as the protagonist could live for thousands of years. If he lived in modern society, he would not survive to adulthood. His breath is louder than athlete's foot. It's really funny. A swordsman should have a gentleman's demeanor, be humble, calm and restrained.

Not bad, not bad, I almost felt deeply hypnotized watching it!

I personally think it looks good! ! ! ! ! !