Seeking Immortality

It is already a very good novel about cultivating immortals. The first half is particularly exciting. It is obvious that the writing in the second part, especially in the immortal world, is a bit rushed. However, it doesn't hurt. I was a little tired of reading it when I saw it. The number of words is a bit too much 😂😂😂

Overall, there are no big logical flaws. The sentences and story are all good. The first half is more exciting, but I feel less interested in the later part. However, it is better than most cool novels, and it shouldn't have such a low score.

Is this so smart? It's just a business, and a small level difference makes a world of difference. Forcibly create conflicts

I finally found a style similar to that of a mortal, and it feels okay.