The Mysterious Revival: Worshipping the Gods

After all, you are a newcomer. As an editor, I would like to give you some suggestions. Good. Having more words is a good thing, and having inspiration is also a good thing. You must learn to compress later. Follow the original work. From a structural point of view, there is nothing wrong with it, and it is a very novel setting. Have a high score. This is indelible and cannot be replicated. Need to be maintained. Strive to create a huge worldview yourself. Instead of writing fan fiction. Dare to innovate and challenge yourself. The content is too wordy. The paragraphs are formalized, which I personally feel is not necessary. There are so many emotional descriptions. When it's time to write about setting up the scene, when it's time to write about the setting of the scene, when it's time to write about the people's actions, try to be as concise as possible. Decisive, like Mr. Squid, try to use the simplest movements when writing about people. Just one sentence. If you use too many words, it will look like a piece of writing that will not be up to grade. Your idea is already very good. There is no need to modify the content too much. I listened to your book for about 50 hours. More than 200 pictures. I feel very verbose. After all, if you look at the original book, they wrote it very concisely. They all said that the original work was about humans and ghosts. Not really. The author focuses the entire book on ghosts rather than people. He condenses the emotions of the characters very well. Not much needs to change. You insist on writing about some relationships between people, which is a good idea. But your ability is not enough. In Sister Hong's words, your level is too low. The writing is too verbose due to lack of experience. In addition, some of your scene descriptions and atmosphere rendering did not reach the level of the original work. These are actually not difficult. Still needs more practice. Secondly, I give this book an overall score of 8.9. Each site has a different scoring system. But at the starting point, well, you must not be lower than this score. About 9.0. Come on! (°ㅅ°)☝

This woman kept saving her. I met her a few times in the early stage and saved her twice. She also helped her control the ghost crying face and then 100% let her control the ghost smiling face. I just became her nanny👎

Invincible, if you don't want to give Tong Qian a ghostly smile, you can create one yourself, right? Can you kill this b-girl?

What can I say, except that the protagonist has changed and the plot has not changed, the further you go to the back, the more you stretch your hips.

Too wordy

Simply changed the protagonist and the supernatural

I feel like the author wants to write something of his own but can't understand it. Many of the plots are incomprehensible.