Sword of Coming: An Immortal Descends, and I Marry Ning Yao from the Start

I just want to say one thing: author, if you're writing fanfiction and insist on everything being exactly the same as the original, you might as well stop writing. Why not just read the original? What is fanfiction anyway? If you're not writing fanfiction, what are you doing here to make money?

Excellent, excellent! I wonder how the male protagonist transmigrated, and how he became Qi Jingchun's apprentice after transmigrating. I hope the author can fill in the gaps in the later chapters. The female lead is currently confirmed to be Ning Yao. It's unclear whether it will be a multi-female lead or a single female lead.

It's another case of someone knowing the plot has cheat codes but doing nothing, then complaining about how this person is suffering and that person is having a hard time. It's making me sweat buckets! 😅 Just sitting there, indulging in self-pity and self-indulgent sentimentality, writing a bunch of nonsense.

I hope the female lead is Ruan Xiu or Ning Yao.

Um, it's usually fanfiction where the main character accompanies Chen Ping'an all the way to the end, and then they just repeat all the original story's themes. The pairings have changed, which is normal, but it's all rather bland.

Very average

I don't understand what the author is writing. There are contradictions. When Cui Minghuang first appears, he says the person has an ordinary appearance, then later he says they are handsome and refined. Is he attacking himself?

It's terrible. I read it for ages and still couldn't figure out what the author was trying to say.

Isn't this just taking the original work and changing it into something else?

I think the initial concept and writing style, as well as the characterization of the main character, were quite good. In the middle part, it felt like a complete copy of the original work, just with a different protagonist. I basically had no desire to continue reading and preferred to read the original work. Later on, it just looked like a mess, not meant to be seen. It seems the author really ran out of ideas in the later stages.