
I Handed in the Crossing Door
About This Novel
Zhu Jue has obtained the time-travel gate system. As long as he travels to other worlds to complete tasks, he can continue to become stronger and transcendent. But after he went around the world of "Alien 1" in the first copy and quickly discovered that he was an ordinary person, it seemed difficult to complete those difficult tasks... He didn't want to give birth to aliens, so he immediately decisively chose to hand himself over to the country! And since then he has lived a happy life as a useless person, with the country doing the work for him and enjoying the benefits with the country...
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Official(40)Scraped 20d ago
Isn't this what the book is called? Follow and copy?
Poor writing style
There's not much to say. The main thing is to read this book and see how the author makes China more and more awesome.
official edict
Author, because your works are not ordinary, you have forcibly occupied three recommendation positions, and then we received many complaints about your books. Therefore, after reading the official verdict, this behavior has seriously affected the readers, Dad, and the penalty will be increased by 100 chapters. I appreciate this!
The main text is too confusing
There are too many narrations. The narrations completely drive the main plot. There is no dialogue between the protagonist and the supporting characters.
Give the author some advice
The wealth of a country is not money; Money is just a means for the state to control people. I saw that the author always said there was not enough money in the article. Here is a brief summary for the author. Does twelve years of compulsory education cost a lot of money? In fact, only oil, paper and food are consumed. Other wages and miscellaneous expenses will only circulate in the market. There will be no increase in funds in the market; Nor will it be reduced. Scientific research is indeed expensive. However, the funds consumed by reverse engineering technology are less than one percent of scientific research. For example, 78 billion was spent on scientific research on cancer drugs. Reverse projection only requires 20 million to produce. Another example is the rocket engine, which cost RMB 600 billion for scientific research. Working backwards, it only takes 280 million to create the same one.
The subject matter is okay, I hope it can be improved over time.
1. Through the comments, I can see that it is a novice writer. 2. I hope to gradually improve my writing skills. 3. I hope the author can make more interactive improvements and not stop updating. 4. Don't stop updating! ! ! ! ! ! 5. Show mercy to trolls! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 5. Don't cut off (≧Д≦)......................
This book is well written, with solid and profound writing, vivid characters, exciting plot, and ups and downs. Especially that sentence, please give me a reward. Please give me a recommendation vote. How can I describe in one good word? After reading it, why don't you leave without clicking ? [Emot=default,52/]
Just wait till it's over
As long as this kind of novel becomes slightly popular, no rating will be even slightly higher, and the upper limit is horribly low. This book collapsed in the early stage (rating). Rating is a very important thing. As a reader, you can't feel it, but as long as you write a book, you will understand the importance of this kind of thing.
Take a look first
I saw someone bound to the main god earlier. After awakening, I can take n people with me. The first mission was to the zombie world. I didn't dare to go. I contacted the country and asked the country for help. If I didn't help, the zombies would invade the world if the mission failed. The second mission seemed to be zombies. I don't remember. The third mission was the world of Avatar. I didn't add it to my collection after watching it. I don't know how it is now.
I always feel like my sentences are not smooth.
I feel like the sentences are not fluent and I have some difficulty reading.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(40)Scraped 20d ago
Isn't this what the book is called? Follow and copy?
Poor writing style
There's not much to say. The main thing is to read this book and see how the author makes China more and more awesome.
official edict
Author, because your works are not ordinary, you have forcibly occupied three recommendation positions, and then we received many complaints about your books. Therefore, after reading the official verdict, this behavior has seriously affected the readers, Dad, and the penalty will be increased by 100 chapters. I appreciate this!
The main text is too confusing
There are too many narrations. The narrations completely drive the main plot. There is no dialogue between the protagonist and the supporting characters.
Give the author some advice
The wealth of a country is not money; Money is just a means for the state to control people. I saw that the author always said there was not enough money in the article. Here is a brief summary for the author. Does twelve years of compulsory education cost a lot of money? In fact, only oil, paper and food are consumed. Other wages and miscellaneous expenses will only circulate in the market. There will be no increase in funds in the market; Nor will it be reduced. Scientific research is indeed expensive. However, the funds consumed by reverse engineering technology are less than one percent of scientific research. For example, 78 billion was spent on scientific research on cancer drugs. Reverse projection only requires 20 million to produce. Another example is the rocket engine, which cost RMB 600 billion for scientific research. Working backwards, it only takes 280 million to create the same one.
The subject matter is okay, I hope it can be improved over time.
1. Through the comments, I can see that it is a novice writer. 2. I hope to gradually improve my writing skills. 3. I hope the author can make more interactive improvements and not stop updating. 4. Don't stop updating! ! ! ! ! ! 5. Show mercy to trolls! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 5. Don't cut off (≧Д≦)......................
This book is well written, with solid and profound writing, vivid characters, exciting plot, and ups and downs. Especially that sentence, please give me a reward. Please give me a recommendation vote. How can I describe in one good word? After reading it, why don't you leave without clicking ? [Emot=default,52/]
Just wait till it's over
As long as this kind of novel becomes slightly popular, no rating will be even slightly higher, and the upper limit is horribly low. This book collapsed in the early stage (rating). Rating is a very important thing. As a reader, you can't feel it, but as long as you write a book, you will understand the importance of this kind of thing.
Take a look first
I saw someone bound to the main god earlier. After awakening, I can take n people with me. The first mission was to the zombie world. I didn't dare to go. I contacted the country and asked the country for help. If I didn't help, the zombies would invade the world if the mission failed. The second mission seemed to be zombies. I don't remember. The third mission was the world of Avatar. I didn't add it to my collection after watching it. I don't know how it is now.
I always feel like my sentences are not smooth.
I feel like the sentences are not fluent and I have some difficulty reading.
















