Complain, Avoid Pitfalls, and of Course Have Recommendations

Recommendation: Full marks (full marks for Siheyuan fans, and full marks for just looking at the chronology) Other Siheyuan fanfics demonize the characters in the play, but this one clearly describes the human weaknesses of the characters in the play, and handles the plot very well. I can only say that anyone who writes Siheyuan fanfiction should read it and learn from it.

Total score: 4 points, overall: 1 point (extremely poisonous) Imagination: 0 points A very ordinary HP fic, the protagonist is a healer, and he takes over the role of the school doctor's wife and studies black magic. Brain pit-3 points The author has a problem with his IQ, his own statements are incorrect, and he wrote a sissy protagonist and why is he not being mentioned? The level of refining magic potion is more than ten times that of Snape, which is outrageous. What kind of elixir can produce five pints of finished product from one ingredient? Where are you making Coke? A large bottle of Coke only has five pints, and Snape only produced a small bottle of the finished product based on the materials. He really couldn't write well, and there was no hint at all in the plot. The first-year Harry suddenly mastered the Flying Charm? Reading: 4 points At most, it has no flaws and no advantages. In addition, I suggest you read a dictionary and use accurate words when piling up words. If you use wrong words and people misunderstand, do you really blame yourself for your low IQ? Plot: 3 points It's smooth, with no ups and downs at all, and it's very embarrassing to lick the original protagonist. To be honest, you are a Slytherin wizard who was around the same time as Snape, and you are also a school employee. It's really embarrassing to lick the original protagonist.

Total score: 2 points, overall: 0.5 Points (extremely poisonous) Brainstorm: 1 point Saitama's ability to be the protagonist Goldfinger was poorly written, the global dungeon was also poorly written, the plot of the dungeon or the monsters that only the protagonist knew were also poorly written, and the total of the three was still the same, poorly written. Brain pit -4 points The bald protagonist is a point deduction. The protagonist and the supporting characters show off their lower IQ limits. Of course, many authors will write about the lower limit of showing off. This author is like this, but the lower limit of showing is the lower limit of showing. Playing with fools will make you a fool. It is the same as reading a book. If you read too many idiot plots, your IQ will subtly lower. Reading: 3 points There is no flaw in reading, it just shows off the lower limit of understanding. Plot: 2 points In fact, there is no plot at all. What plot could One Punch Man have? Just keep downloading copies to become stronger. You are not tired of zombies, zombies (World War of the Dead), night demons and the latest aliens in the plot, but I am really tired of it.

The total score is 16 points, comprehensive: 4 points (food and grass) Brainstorming: 3 points This kind of idea of putting two opposite or even conflicting settings together is actually poorly written, but as long as it is combined well, it is indeed a selling point. For example, "Say Good to Develop a Bad Game" is also a variant of this idea. Brain pit -1 point There is no crazy setting. If there is any flaw, the villain's IQ is too low. Reading: 8 points It is highly readable and logically coherent. Plot: 6 points The plot is actually not that good, it's just average. The world view set is very huge, but so far, the world shown... Is at most a small copy of a fantasy game.

Total score: 4 points, comprehensive score: 1 point (extremely poisonous) Brainstorming: 3 points In this world, mechanics are superior to others. Every machine has an organic soul, and the protagonist can talk to the machine soul. This idea is actually not bad, but the setting in the book is too stupid, and it is a complete waste of this idea. Brain pit: -9 points Machine souls have different personalities, which leads to different needs. The setting is very good, so that the protagonist can talk to the machine soul, train the machine soul, or let the machine soul tell him what parts are broken and start repairing them directly. However, in our world, there is a profession called engineer, who can use various instruments to detect what is broken in a machine. If it can be repaired, it will be repaired, and if it cannot be repaired, it will be scrapped. There is also a word called yield rate. If a batch of products cannot be detected as broken, it means it cannot be used. Then it will be scrapped directly and the materials will be recycled. In this book, this kind of waste product is an existence with a bad character. It needs to be provided and coaxed by the mechanic, and it may not be possible to repair it again. So technology is so advanced, and a book in the industrial era still wastes resources to raise waste as if it were an ancestor? Duoduo is sick. Moreover, the machine soul in the setting is basically a mascot. In addition to causing trouble to the user, offering good words and coaxing, at most it does not cause trouble, and does not even strengthen or provide additional skills. When you set up this kind of machine soul, you might as well set up entries or something like that, at least it's not a background board. Reading: 6 points There is no logical problem, it can only be said that there is no dyslexia. Plot: 4 points The protagonist is a loser, and then he becomes a blockbuster, and various forces are rushing to get it. The plot was too greasy ten years ago, and it is 3202 years ago, and it is still entertaining itself.

I just discovered a good book that is worth investing in reading. The logic is reasonable, not brainless, the rhythm is very tight (for now), the description is very realistic, and it is surprisingly a bit refreshing. The protagonist starts the game with a soul-piercing debt and owes five million U. S. Dollars (I guess it's U. S. Dollars). It's reasonable to complain about his predecessor. The background is the 1960s, and a Hollywood director is used as the plot introduction. The key is that the names of each place are very interesting. My guess is that each character in the place name is taken apart to form a word, and then the antonym is taken and then another word is combined. For example, Los Angeles -> Senhaiya, Hollywood -> Badwood, New York -> Zhizhi, Disney -> Gahoni (would Gaganney be better?), Warner Brothers -> Jian Zhe Brothers. Will Canada reduce its emissions next, and Mexico->Bai Dongdi? It's so funny...

8 points, a good post-apocalyptic story. Being thrown into a nuclear apocalypse, you can enter the game to obtain resources and props, and build a city on a real-life basis. The protagonist Goldfinger can travel through time and enter the game to obtain resources. It can be read as a game article or a game astronomy. Overall, worth reading.

8 points game article. It feels a lot like watching Absinthe: The Strongest Tamer many years ago. The virtual online game shows the world of Invincible Heroes very well. The main plot is the fairy line. The protagonist connects the plot of the entire game world through the racial plot of first-level monsters such as goblins. The protagonist, Goldfinger, has become nothing more than a seasoning. This is a novel with a plot that is more exciting than imagination, and can be read as a fantasy novel.

8 points entertainment article. This is an entertainment article mainly about survival. It is also the beginning of a survival chapter, and the survival content is well written. But the results are much worse than the other one, but I personally think it is better written than that one. Since it is an entertainment article, it cannot be justified without any entertainment content, right? I have been reading the other book for a long time since it came out, just for survival and fun. This book has a good grasp of the situation. He has participated in many survival variety shows, interspersed with entertainment content. The writing is also very good, and the description of survival is also very realistic.

It is relatively unconventional among American comic book fans. It is a dark American comic. The last one was a spiritual guide. But this one is about the MCU, and the plot of the parallel world is obviously better. 7 Points, counting food and grass.

A book worth reading carefully is called Meizong. It is actually about the daily lives of American police officers. The details are very good and the writing is very thoughtful. It is recommended that you lie in bed and read it slowly in the middle of the night.

The writing is good and the logic is smooth. It is worth collecting and reading. Highlights: In this book, you can not only see the infrastructure of the end of the world, the infrastructure of the moon, the infrastructure of Mars, and even go to Mercury to mine ore, but you can also see the battle of wits and courage with the air, the West clearing each other's territory, and even the protagonist has a little bit of conscience (crossed out).

One Piece's navy travels to the world of Faerûn in Dungeons and Dragons. A good fantasy novel. However, the setting of extraordinary power does not balance the two worlds well. The protagonist is just a naval general. In Faerûn, the forgotten world that is said to be able to kill the gods and the most dangerous place in Dungeons and Dragons, he can be invincible. It is not convincing at all.

Recommendation: 8.5 Points, Qing Dynasty historical text, written about the Kangxi Dynasty. Advantages: The plot of the novel is not watery at all, and the early pace is very fast. Nowadays, the author can't wait for a plot to be watery for tens of thousands of words. This is really a conscientious author. There is almost one plot point in the first one to three chapters. It is easier to miss the exciting plot and foreshadowing by skipping chapters. Moreover, the writing style is really good, and the use of punctuation marks is also very comfortable. I don't think that the author just wants to use commas to complete the sentences for you. It reads very smoothly. Disadvantages: It's also sloppy, fast-paced, and I don't know what the author can write later.

Recommended 7.5 Points, the creativity is actually average, the reality is strangely revived, the protagonist enters the game and gains extraordinary power, which is already a lot here. Advantages: It is an advantage that I don't write about popular game works (DNF, LOL, pesticides, etc.). After all, fans of Dianniang's popular games made me want to vomit after reading them. It is a smart move for the author to use legend as a selling point. Disadvantages: The author's writing style needs to be improved.

Recommended 7 points, the plot is a bit bland. Advantages: Starting from the occult family, I am tired of looking at all kinds of ninjas, and this book is a breath of fresh air. The writing technique is a bit of a rant, which is very suitable for light novel readers. Poisonous point: The article says that the protagonist has various kinds of papers... I really can't see where he is? Compared with the protagonists of the same type of novels with a golden finger, the protagonist of this novel is also a salty fish. The author really doesn't know what a scroll is.

Wednesday Jiang on the fourth day of July. The protagonist is not a human being, but a tiger who traveled through time and space. To be honest, the beginning is not attractive enough, and the author's ideas are not novel. The starting point is that non-human abortion was particularly popular a few years ago. Brother Cong, who is weak, pitiful and helpless, evolves up from the bottom of the food chain, and may eventually evolve into a super human or super animal. I can only say that the author of this book has good writing skills, and I kind of suspect that the old author is trying to compete with the newcomers with a new vest or something.

Wednesday Jiang on the fourth day of July. All I can say is that this author doesn't play by the rules, and the beginning is quite interesting, so just enjoy it, hay. But the author really doesn't know the sufferings of the world. How can a college student have a monthly living expenses of 3,000? And is this protagonist serious? Are you born with vicious bones and grow so big that you can scare children to tears? Where can I get a sense of immersion? But now readers seem to like this kind of thing. The more irrational it is, the more they like it. It doesn't matter how logical or illogical you are, as long as it's fun.

9/26 Sanjiang, food and grass. Create a strange recovery in the three-body science fiction world. The plot is good, but the author in the opening chapter portrays the protagonist as too ignorant, pretending not to understand even common sense things. Before time travel, he clearly had a high degree of education, but after time travel, he became completely stupid, unable to understand human speech, and even basic physics?

9/19 Sanjiang, theme hay, full text... Let's put it this way, if you have money, you can read it as long as you want. This book is about the rolling waves of the Yangtze River and the water flowing eastward to the sea. One thousand words in one chapter are about card attributes, what the card is made of, and how the card compares to other cards. Then play a copy and continue with the card attributes, what the card is made of, and how the card compares to other cards. There is no real-life plot. Why can players not log off? Just one sentence: The player himself doesn't know it. Once he is conscious, it is in the game, and the origin of the player is not clear (maybe the ending will explain it). This book has a kind of ending: when it reaches the shelf, no one wants to see the sea, subscriptions are bleak, and it is discontinued; or the author fails to write it, and writes more than a million words, only to get one vote, and then it is unfinished. A reminder to readers: Be cautious when entering the pit, unless you have a mine at home (and don't care about your life).