Complain, Avoid Pitfalls, and of Course Have Recommendations

I mention this book on the book list because it seems to be quite good (so far) and it can be regarded as food. But there are still a lot of things I want to complain about. The first is the setting of magic. The protagonist Goldfinger's early magic in the book can be learned as long as you know what it is, and you don't need to know why. This is something I really want to complain about. The protagonist's golden finger is magical knowledge and a rule for using energy, just like physics. It's true that you can still use the Holy Sword of Physics (crowbar) even if you don't understand the rules of physics. It can indeed give you a fulcrum and you can move the earth. But if I give you a crowbar, do you know how to use the crowbar besides fighting and picking locks? What kind of fulcrum should be found, and how long should the two ends of the fulcrum be to pry open the locked door? Or even how long do you need a crowbar to move the earth? It's like solving a problem in an exam. You know the answer to this question. If you write the correct answer, the teacher will give you zero points because you didn't write down the process of solving the problem. There are actually more points to complain about later on. The protagonist Goldfinger is called the Book of Medivh. In the World of Warcraft setting, Medivh is more talented than his mother. Being able to become a guardian means that his strength has reached or exceeded his mother when he became a guardian. Medivh is proficient in all arcane magic, regardless of time and space. It does not mean that he must be able to travel through time to be proficient in time magic. Traveling through time is the duty given to the bronze dragon by the creator (possibly a Titan) to guard time. But the protagonist's Medivh is set as a barbaric mage who can only wield a staff, which is very annoying.

9/19 Sanjiang, asked about the article, there is nothing to say, he died of poison, he didn't even need to read it, no matter how he wrote it, the question is the favorite of the studio, it is a template, the writers below can just copy it. This type of writing suddenly became popular, and then the studio took a fancy to this genre, and all the bees swarmed in, like flies, larvae and maggots in a cesspool, turning this type of writing into shit. It's impossible to write essays like Naruto and Pirates, but Marvel essays are easy to write. If you describe the movie in words, with a little originality in the middle, and a story that has no beginning or end, you can attract a large number of mentally retarded young people who have no idea of ​​spoilers to read the article. If you have traffic, you have data, and the Qidian revised recommendation position standards are met, you can choose good recommendation positions. Let's put it aside, the Marvel+ question stream is garbage! Don't step on thunder, everyone!

9/19 Sanjiang, the writing is average, the logic is poor, so it is a poisonous weed. I just don't understand, now young people want to be pampered every day? How about not talking about the text first? This title has a lot of flaws. My wife? So how is your wife? Let me tell you a fact. In reality, rich women who make their own fortune are all career-oriented women. Such people will not care for a pretty girl, and they are looking for a husband for practical purposes. There are two types of people who know how to raise pretty boys: those whose husbands are dead, the most they can do is play with them for a while and then throw them away; those whose husbands are not dead, either are so stupid that sooner or later their husband will break all the pretty boys' third legs, and those whose husbands play with them until they are useless. And then how about the start? Now UC no longer has a shocking part, but a partial one! Most of the studios have this kind of headline-making stuff, and the readers who click on it are either useless or stupid. Trap and kill 400,000 enemy troops? Why don't you trap and kill four million people? Forty million is more passionate! Wouldn't it be better to just kill 400 million people directly? Anyway, they are all brainless. Why not be more happy if you have no brains?

9/19 Sanjiang, poisonous weeds. The first chapter was poisonous. This book reminded me of an American TV series about the modern life of vampires. I forgot what it was called. If you are interested, you can search it on Baidu. It is a comedy and the vampires in it are very funny. It turns out that the protagonist suddenly mutated and turned into a vampire. He was not bitten or hugged for the first time. He just suddenly mutated. Is your vampire so greedy? Can it mutate suddenly? I'm lying, I've seen a lot of vampires. There are Twilight movies, Witch Awakening, the comedy I just mentioned, American comics, and the Oriental depictions in Uncle Nine... This is the first time I've encountered such a sudden mutation... A dragon begets a dragon, a phoenix begets a phoenix, and a mouse's son can make holes. The protagonist dad appears in the first chapter. A normal human being suddenly mutates after giving birth to a son? Can you talk about some basic methods when writing? Why did you mutate after watching a table tennis match without winning the championship? Can you pull it off a little more?

Food, Golden Finger is optional, just take a look, it's somewhere between martial arts and fairy tales, it takes the route of solving crimes, it starts out as an adaptation of A Chinese Ghost Story, and the writing is also good. Tell a joke: A certain naughty kid: Dad said, mom has water in her head. Protagonist: Is there water in your head too? Naughty kid: I don't have water in my head. Brother, do you have water in your head? Protagonist: I don't have any water in my head. Above, Youdao is a primary school student who is the god of death. He may be very smart because he will not grow up. The protagonist who has brains but no water in ancient times solves crimes and slays monsters along the way... Water accounts for most of the weight of the human head. If it leaks, it will die. If there is no water... It will be a mummy. The second point of complaint is that the article is not on point, Liaozhai kills demons... Where is Liaozhai? Where is the demon? But Zhan Heren saw that... Nie Xiaoqian did not turn into a ghost, Yan Chixia was a pretty boy, the tree demon grandma was gone, and the Taoist sect became the villain... I beg you, author, please change the title of the book, okay? Wherever the protagonist goes, the case coincidentally follows him. This is as good as the death of a primary school student. You can just change the name to "Detective Pretty Boy" or "The Killer Detective"🌚🌚🌚😱😱😱

9/13 Sanjiang, poisonous weeds. There are three books left that I haven't read yet. I didn't want to read them any more, so Shuhuang clicked in again and took a look. After reading one chapter, I quit. The male protagonist has a car and a house but no 35-year loan, so he is unemployed and homeless, and he is somehow the second generation rich. Then start the blind date as a female supporting role. If you have a boyfriend and come to the blind date, you have to write about the psychological activities of the female supporting role: compare it with your boyfriend and see how it goes. Just the whole green tea? The following describes the male protagonist going on twenty blind dates. Every woman is either green tea or white lotus. The male protagonist can fall in love with anyone in the world? A typical disgusting male protagonist who even has to create a character for himself. 😱😱😱🦠🦠🦠

9/13 Sanjiang, Hay, I won't comment on this military book... I'll just complain about it. You can't let dads down, right? Let me give you a grade first. When I read a book, I look first at the writing style and secondly at the prose. These two are so bad that I can't watch it no matter how good the plot is. It's not too much to give this book a thumbs up based on these two points. Military literature... The whole time travel, I haven't read the book (I read the first chapter), but it feels like it's like Zhutianliu, mercenary + Zhutian, I can't think of it anyway? Get a gun but Azeroth chugs? I think any mage in Stormwind City can kill the protagonist. Or does the protagonist take a gun and go to the martial arts world? Oh... The protagonist can go to the martial arts world to learn some martial arts. After all, the protagonist is a compulsory soldier at the beginning... He is the weakest kind. The army does not teach anything, just trains (it may be very perfunctory, depending on which military region), and has zero actual combat experience... And then these soldiers go abroad (suddenly found a point to complain about) to become mercenaries? Which company would want such a sailor? The protagonist is set to make money to treat his brother's illness. He may work very hard, or he may show his potential. However, the opposite side is full of vicious big-headed soldiers. Your protagonist may not even have the right posture to hold the gun. When he fires the shot, he will be knocked out by the recoil and his face will be bloody. It's like an old actor giving a lesson to a young actor. This is how you hold a gun. You hold a submachine rifle in one hand without holding it on your shoulder, and you just jerk all the way? You're afraid that your arm might have been broken first, and the bullets would have been flying around, causing all your teammates to succumb. Finished complaining... I feel comfortable. I haven't read any military literature. I haven't seen any military movies yet/laughs

On 9/13 Sanjiang, I died of poison. I died. The writing is good, I want to praise it. The protagonist is very beautiful at the beginning. The wedding night is full of flowers and candles, the lady is beautiful and gentle, and she does some embarrassing things that you all know. And then... Hey WC, I solemnly remind you: non-special enthusiasts should be careful before entering! Be careful! Brothers. My marriage partner is a Scorpion. I won't say anything about the opening day. It scares my dad to death! It also lays an egg in the protagonist's belly... The author feels like he can't write this kind of plot without a bit of B. T hobby. The white lady can only show her snake tail in the middle of the night. Qiu Sheng said that the cold beauty at least enjoys it very much, and will not show the prototype of a rotting corpse when doing that. As long as your protagonist has a strong heart, he won't die. Author, give it a try. I'm afraid you'll die if you try. This book was decisively deleted. Anyway, I think it is extremely poisonous, or it is rotting corpse poison. After reading it, the poisonous hair is full of holes! ! !

9/13 Sanjiang, Golden Finger is a bit interesting, but no more, Chai Cao. The most unbearable... I gave the protagonist his girlfriend at the beginning, but ended up being cheated on. It feels like the author wants all the readers to be cheated on, who can take on the role of such a protagonist. I stopped reading after reading one chapter. I originally thought that Goldfinger was quite interesting, with one hundred and eight ways to destroy the world, but in the end... Can't you just be a ruin in the beginning, and then rise up in the later stage? You must make this kind of opening that can poison normal male readers. It feels like the author is either a stingy older bachelor. Or have experienced it. Or a bitchy woman. To be more to the point, it's still okay if we take out the plot involving this woman and skip the first few chapters...

9/13 Sanjiang, I don't know how to evaluate it. Dian Niang gives great advantages to the writings of great masters. Ordinary authors want a book title within five words or less and would be crazy about it, but great masters can just apply (complain about it). There is a saying: The great master's emphasis on divine quality (forced style) is fire, and the new author's emphasis on strong character is death. This novel is undoubtedly a full-scale novel. The whole story reveals that my writing is fluent, my words are appropriate, and I am extremely educated. If you are tired of seeing the charming swordsman next door pretending to be slapped in the face, don't worry, I have made a super luxurious package to give you a new experience. Old wine in an old bottle, sprayed with a layer of fluorescent paint, never changes away from the essence. The same story is repackaged. Anyway, I think it is no different from a game with a new skin. Those games really have the gold of Mei Laoban. I also watched the beginning, and I felt that the protagonist was just mindless and unhappy, with well-developed limbs and a simple mind. To me, it really didn't make sense at all.

9/13 Sanjiang, poisonous weeds. Someone told me that love stories are very popular now, and if you put on a layer of love, you will be blown away... Please, is this a fairy tale? The world is going to be destroyed in front of us, but here we are still in love. When we are in love, we suddenly have to manage our time? It's not Li Xiaoyao... Li Xiaoyao still has a reason to take a girl with him. The beginning of this book turns pink strangely? ? Horror!

9/13 Sanjiang, poisonous weeds. At the beginning, the protagonist was demoted to the prince. The reason was that he didn't respect the sect? Which dynasty in the past did not come to the martial arts sect? Shaolin still wants to sit on the head of the royal family and shit? Then a character summoning system comes out. Will the summoned characters betray you? This is very poisonous, okay? If the characters don't betray the plot below, why would you add a betrayal setting? If there was a betrayal plot, it would be extremely toxic. The main plot is probably that the demoted prince summons the bull-nosed figures from all over the world to form a force, and then he probably returns to the imperial city to seize the throne, or overthrows the sect. You will know the ending when you see the beginning. Not interesting.

9/13 Sanjiang, poisonous weeds. He's also the kind of protagonist who gets upgraded inexplicably just for no apparent reason. One of the characteristics of this kind of writing is that at the beginning, the protagonist is afraid of death and trouble, and then no matter what the golden finger is, after a while, the protagonist's temperament changes drastically, and he pretends to be pretentious and gets into trouble. Do your readers know that there is such a big contrast between the protagonist before and after? Then the whole world began to be shocked and surprised, and people died. Can we talk about some basic methods when writing an article?

9/13 Sanjiang's sixth to last book, Chaicao. I discovered a pattern: if the title of a book exceeds a cross, if the title exceeds one word, the toxicity increases. At first glance, it looks like the Day of Destruction, oh, Superman's old enemy, but when you click on it, it's not the Day of Destruction at all. It's the real Day of Destruction, when the moon hits the earth and the world is destroyed. Then the protagonist begins to flow through the heavens... I originally thought that the protagonist would be able to fight the sky and the earth at the beginning, but it turns out that it is a slow-burning type, and it is classified as science fiction. The beginning of the game travels through the ancient background? Do you know what science fiction is? Science fantasy, technological fantasy... What's going on in ancient times?

9/13 The fifth to last book in Sanjiang, a super poison that causes death. It's like a sea flooding, a question and answer that spans more than ten chapters, and various original movies are described to you in words, and then the plot is less than two or three chapters long, and the next round of questions and answers spans tens of thousands of words. What about writing Nima? I'm here to see the second creation. If I want to see the original movie, why don't I just go to the movie? Either the studio copied the sample text and added some original plot. Or just copy the studio hydrology.

9/13 Sanjiang is the third to last book. I can't comment on it. For me, it's the poisonous point. The choice of materials itself is the poisonous point. City + Prehistoric, the urban male protagonist swaps identities with the leader of the Jie Cult, the urban male protagonist suddenly becomes a saint, you can judge for yourself. In terms of writing, it is neither white nor ancient, half urban and half prehistoric, so it is also very poisonous.

On 9/13, Sanjiang's last book was released, extremely poisonous. Of course, if you like mindless fun, then Chaicao is it. It is also the kind of world where there is a game editor, and the protagonist can make game settings without knowing anything. This world view is not considered poisonous. But combined with the next one, it is extremely poisonous. The whole world is a game desert. There are no good games. The main character is a brainless transport game and it is very popular. There are game editors in this world. Are everyone in the world idiots? What kind of game type has been out in this kind of world for a long time? After all, you can make games without knowing anything, so why are billions of people around the world showing off their brains? Can't even think of a single good idea? Just waiting for the protagonist to mow the grass without thinking? Another point... This author doesn't understand game production at all. The first game was characterized by a fear of ghosts. Instead, the player directly saw ghosts and then hunted them with his face? ? Players have all seen ghosts and are mentally prepared. Even a three-year-old child may not be frightened if you try to kill someone close to your face. The essence of ghost phobia is that players cannot see ghosts. Only special equipment can see ghosts. The unknown is the most frightening. If a hand suddenly reaches out on the screen, the player is not prepared at all. This is when the fear value is the highest. Are you really going to take the cake?

Recently, I have become obsessed with Conan fanfiction. It is also a good book, and the author is very attentive and drew a lot of illustrations at his own expense.

Playing Games in Azeroth is the first article I've read on Qidian that is both a virtual online game and a game in another world. The author combines the two very well without being obtrusive.

In a Conan fanfic, the protagonist has a... System? A system with a very low sense of existence, a delicate writing style, and the protagonist's surname is Karasuma. The goal is clear from the beginning, to overthrow the organization. Forage